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Chantilly Lace
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Chantilly Lace |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Chantilly Lace I braise my poems in rhyme and phrase Ablaze them to avoid malaise. I pepper them to audit awe But always leave an exit door. I glaze the words in spews of brew See through views of symbol cues and Place the threaded chantilly lace About the head it will embrace. I try to fit it to the mind Massaging all of human kind With dare and care I place it there This lace to grace its loving heir. I do not prosper all I sew Some minds and hearts I do not know But I try, I try, always try And if I miss I sigh a sigh. And say be kind my near embrace It is my dear chantilly lace. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I do not prosper all I sew Some minds and hearts I do not know But I try, I try, always try And if I miss I sigh a sigh. And say be kind my near embrace It is my dear chantilly lace. I like, I like *s...I think you succeed very well at all attempts to drape your lacings around those who view your words and thoughts..*sighing* ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
a chantilly frangrance all around with dare and care I placed it there only the promise of it to be torn down... Sy...two of my favorite words, chantilly and lace... evoking many memories... sending you a soft smile...thank you... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
By you words penned of lace ... I feel the warmth of your poetic embrace. Your rhymes of gold dance with grace ... of my malaise ... granting chase. Words of wisdom ... on the heart engraving trace ... always to leave a sigh(SY) on my lips ... and a smile on my face. *winkiewinkie* later-make me sigh-gator  me When to the sessions of sweet silent thought, I summon up remembrance of things past ... I sigh the lack of many a thing I sought. ~Shakespeare~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
No need to sigh, Sy... you never miss. *S* And just the sight of your title has given me a gift of memory to brighten my day... many thanks. *S* |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
This is such a joyful, gentle read. You've written very cleverly, weaving in and out your thoughts in rhythm and rhyme. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Writing is like trying out a new recipe..you just never know how it will turn out ..sometimes you have to go back and doctor it up a little ha.. Loved it Seymour..  ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nakd, Thank you and glad you liked. Karilea, Sorry about the memories. *L* JM, Thankyeethankyee winkiewinkie stinky. Suthern, You welcome and thank you. Vas, Glad you enjoyed the read. Vic, Thanks for loving it. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Sy~ a sincere, beautifully penned piece...loved it ~HUG~ Tracie~ it's so you, sweet man Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Tracie, Thanks for the like and hugs. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sy, never be sorry for writing the good write...just be thankful that your readers still know how to feel... |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
I love this. Wonderously penned, you. Poeminister |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Karilea, I wasn't sorry about what I wrote I was sorry its read caused you bad vibs. *L* Poe, Thank you my friend. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
What I meant to say was...it's OK...LOL...I must get more rest! |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Well spoken, Sy. I, too, always leave an exit door...LOL even if I step on a few toes on the way out occasionally...hehe Michael |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
A tenderly written piece Beautiful phrases from beginning to end Exquisite thoughts combined with lace is romantic and charming Loved it Liz |
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