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Warmth of Spring in My Heart (duet with serenity)
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Warmth of Spring in My Heart (duet with serenity) |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Warmth of Spring In My Heart By serenity and sharon backspacing my life rewriting it as I go every step a cold imprint of all the spaces that I know too afraid to stop now too afraid to let go enchanted by sky of ice that melds into my earthen snow gone now is the chill of you I search for warming sun I would shout for joy this morn, but I fear all would be undone I reach with hands of frost to seek your heart of fire as the sun turns pink the ice unto my heart, I do aspire |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
"I reach with hands of frost to seek your heart of fire as the sun turns pink the ice unto my heart, I do aspire" I applaud you two on a wonderfully composed duet. Excellent writing! Poeminister "...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls- O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love." -Poe |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
backspacing my life rewriting it as I go every step a cold imprint of all the spaces that I know too afraid to stop now too afraid to let go ===================== I reach with hands of frost to seek your heart of fire as the sun turns pink the ice unto my heart, I do aspire ================= very very cool girlies ... your rhymes are on time. mirrors .. so many mirrors later-way cool-duet-gators When to the sessions of sweet silent thought, I summon up remembrance of things past ... I sigh the lack of many a thing I sought. ~Shakespeare~ |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Excellent write  -SEA |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Bravo and much applause for you both! Well expressed, and, boy, do I ever see myself in these words. I'm still trying to let go of him... Take care, Melissa The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Excellent duet! Love this... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I reach with hands of frost to seek your heart of fire as the sun turns pink the ice unto my heart, I do aspire ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Good job girls! Deb |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
LOVELY, you two! poetpartners!! MORE!! |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Lovely images you both created..enjoyed..HUGS ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Thank you all!! The s & s poetry club thanks you! At least I do, the other s is off doing something weird I think - whereas (I love that word!) I am doing the correct thing. I'll go tell her to stop running up and down the street in her Mardi Gras mask and come in her and make nice to all of you!  |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Hi S & S... A spectacular co-write you two have shared... I thank you for this treat to have read a poem you two have penned... *~coco~* |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
*bravo* love these wonderful duet... ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Wonderful duet from you two. You both compliment each other wonderfully in this piece. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Okay, okay...the evil twin has showed up! And I was gonna thank everybody yesterday (WELL, I WAS) But? I could not FIND the durn thing...rofl....but thanks to all, especially to sharon...we finally maintained some seriousness to be able to post one! It's always fun to write with you. Thanks again everyone, and HUGS TO FORUM. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
To two people that mean a lot to me. . . both of you are indeed wonderful. . . and together?? Well, you're both just more wonderful. . . and this is a perfect example. . . Excellent you two. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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