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Essence of You
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Essence of You |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia 
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Essence of You Masking pains traces, running the races Across a blank page, painting her rage Risking love clear, running as rhea Shining each hour never to sour Helping folk heal, with loves' anneal And find's victory, in lifting you, me Grace gives her, balm, extends other's calm Returning to care, she'll willingly share Always on call, friendly to all Catching all those blue, who live with the shoo! Ever in demand by write of her hand like a candy she's sweet and dandy Bright, looking up, drinking life's cup Underneath rush has drive to push Beginning in you,Phoenix grew too Battled we three, your write set your free Lest love spill the plan, your work fine elan Exceptional as sherry as winkled as peri So all she can fix, when placed in her mix Bonnie! a dream, she's peaches and cream Ever reaches high, and proudly she'll fly Vixen at times, in tune with her rhymes Eternally tall and giving her all Raising a clue, she sticks like Uhu Lighting the lights, prays through dark nights Exceptional tush! it gives me a rush Youngish to cry, for her I would try  Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very creative, Kethry! Denise |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
You've done this wonderfully. Excellent acrosticizing. Poeminister "...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls- O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love." -Poe |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kethry dear heart okay love met and beautifully matched. I still say it was far too easy for you love, you know how much this means to me. I know you do, and haven't you done it magnificently. I'm definitely going to have to think of something harder that's all. You little challenge superstar you Take care dear heart and you'll see who's done who in. HA! Love you Slushy  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Kethry~ Absolutely wonderful!! I wish I could do these......I'm terrified to even try......LOL  -SEA |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Wow! I know that a double acrostic is very difficult to pen well. But, Success!! you penned it so very well, what a wonderful dedication Take care, Melissa The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
dsnyder, thanks for the fine words of praise! Poeminister, I would acrosticize for you anyday. SEA, you're joking right...I've seen the acrostics you do... you make them look easy peasy it's a breezy. Melissa, Thanks for stopping by, I always appreciate it. Marsha, This was really HARD! Really and truly it was! I may have to have a lie down for a week! Don't ask me to do it again love I really can't. My crocodile ate all my paper so I can't do another challenge. Be well Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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