Open Poetry #12 |
Crush II (here's some love for ya!) |
mark woolard Member
since 2001-01-02
Posts 143 |
Crush II (Western Kansas Prairie Song) One touch of your hand swept the clouds away. I was left in the sun like cacti. Each breath took me back to a time just like this, only now was the sum of my years. My heart was swollen by the blue of the sky, and my mind was flowers by the dozen. Our shadows fell east, just me and this tree, anticipating the depth of your sunset. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Beautifully done -SEA |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Mark...I had missed this gem, but it touched me through the sand like a wayward arrow's point.... |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
I am surprised by this. Your title gives little indication that one will be reading something so esoteric. I must confess that I find your poem delightful. Thanks for it. Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
A very beautiful write...brilliant job!! Nathan |
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