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he sure loves his wife
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Lana Member
since 2000-12-26
Posts 68 |
I love my wife “Guys, I love my wife she is the meaning for my days and nights. I love her more than anything she makes my heart and soul to sing.” “I’ll never leave her that’s for sure.” Workday fell into evening time the dishes done at last “Honey, are you coming to bed?” “Sure, I’ll be there in a bit,” He’d never leave her. Lights go out and PC comes on another blinking light “Honey, what are you doing in there please don’t you know I need you here?” “Be right there,” Four hours later, his body weak and eyes red he wanders in and reaches for her “here, I am, my dear.” “I’ll never leave you sugar he sure didn't have to... He already had. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
This is painfully sad......well written, really packs a punch.....hugs  -SEA |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Ouch. What a mirror. |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
WOW! |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Extremely well written !!! I wonder why I am not in the least shocked , its because all what you descibed is happening more and more since the arrival in homes of the P.C |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
I know of homes where it's equal time on the PC - perhaps -just perhaps- the 'puter has replaced football - OR the church sewing circle... - Your point is good - AND you nailed it down with her plea - I don't know why I'm playing Devil's advocate. Right/(write) on! |
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