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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2001-01-18 06:00 AM

Unraveling

If you would take the silver among the gold
and begin to tug on the weave,
weakened, the fibers of by gone days,
would unravel the gold that it sheaths.

The brightness would smile it's shine upon you,
the tarnish of silver allayed.
Would you dare to desire the hidden beneath,
would the golden then fright you away?

If you entered within, discovering need
and wanting acceptance to please,
the most intimate pieces of puzzling fit,
would the inside be turned out for your tease?

All the you that is you, many faces in dreams
many characters there to entice,
if my golden appeared 'neath crossings of threads,
would you treasure their hold in the nights?

Reposed, waiting rise, is a heart, staid below
so pure, silken white, thread-barely strung,
dangling on silver, awaiting it's find,
yet guarded, of gold, and unsung.

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

1 posted 2001-01-18 06:06 AM

Wynter,
this was liquid gold, and in response I can only say... Magic!
write on
Kethry

Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2001-01-18 09:05 AM

An absolutely beautiful write

-SEA

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

3 posted 2001-01-18 11:29 AM

Kethry,
thank you for such a sweet response, I wish I could have a magic wand and sweep the world with wishes come true....huggzz

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

4 posted 2001-01-18 11:34 AM

thank you again Sea..~Smiling

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

maxtec1
Senior Member

since 2000-12-09

Posts 577
Garland, Tx

5 posted 2001-01-18 12:50 PM

Wonderful writing, wonderful read.
Love and light,
Richard

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

6 posted 2001-01-18 01:22 PM

Nakd,
Your web of lace
Has lots of grace.
Enjoyed Sy

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

7 posted 2001-01-18 03:37 PM

Glad you could enjoy, Richard *s

Sy,
thank you for your words of kind
I hold them stored within my mind...

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

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