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serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

0 posted 2001-01-18 02:49 AM

If there were but
one drop of dew
in rainbow field
of sparkling hue,
on hands and knees,
beyond Pride's yield--
Know you, now--I would find you.
I do not care for wishes, grant...
However, sweet, is sweet romance...
Bodies--all, they pass away.
Forever--I have felt this way.
You remain connecting piece
to puzzle of eternity.

My heart is but a sacrifice;
and if I could, I'd offer twice--
"Receive this blade,"
the virgin prayed,
"for nothing else, will now suffice..."

(*repost from open 7* for a friend*)

[This message has been edited by serenity (edited 01-18-2001).]

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

1 posted 2001-01-18 02:54 AM

Love will ALWAYS find a way. What a wonderful write from you this morning and it looks like once again.......WE TWO are up and unable to find sleep.

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2001-01-18 08:53 AM

Serenity~ awesome write

-SEA

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

3 posted 2001-01-18 09:17 AM

Know you, now--I would find you.
I do not care for wishes, grant...
However, sweet, is sweet romance...
Bodies--all, they pass away.
Forever--I have felt this way.
You remain connecting piece
to puzzle of eternity.
===============
you write me butterfly heart this morn me twin...
but then you always do ...

""for nothing else, will now suffice..."

hugs baby
love to ya
me

When to the sessions of sweet silent thought,
I summon up remembrance of things past ...
I sigh the lack of many a thing I sought.
~Shakespeare~

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

4 posted 2001-01-18 07:25 PM

very romantic and almost medievil, I love this.

Kathleen

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

5 posted 2001-01-18 10:24 PM

Very beautifully done, Serenity!

Denise

maxtec1
Senior Member

since 2000-12-09

Posts 577
Garland, Tx

6 posted 2001-01-18 10:32 PM

I really enjoyed the feel of this poem. great job.
Love and light,
Richard

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

7 posted 2001-01-18 10:59 PM

"one drop of dew
in rainbow field
of sparkling hue,
on hands and knees,
beyond Pride's yield--
Know you, now--I would find you."

Serenity,
I like the imagery in these lines. Beautifully written.

Poeminister

"...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls-
O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love."
-Poe

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

8 posted 2006-09-27 02:30 AM

You know I know. Love it. *hugs*....jo

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