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Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

0 posted 2001-01-18 01:40 AM

The Day is Ours

Today Lets fly
lets take to the sky
and leave behind this busy-mess

Lets go to where
there's fresh air
where we can relax in serenity's caress

Lets land in a meadow
where things are mellow
Lets live in the fragrance of wild flowers

And enjoy true pleasure
You and I, forever,
because we want to-because, the day is ours

Poeminister

"At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet."
-Plato

A Whisper's Caress
Senior Member

since 2000-11-03

Posts 791
on the horizon of a fairytale

1 posted 2001-01-18 01:41 AM

Looks like I got in here just in time.
This is truly lovely!!!!

Look within the heart of a poet, and you will see a reflection of their soul.

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

2 posted 2001-01-18 02:29 AM

Take advantage of the day anytime you can......and if you can point me to a place where the air is truely clean then I am on my way myself. Wonderful write. I loved the attitude in it much.

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2001-01-18 08:50 AM

PM~ this is lovely......sure wish I could

-SEA

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

4 posted 2001-01-18 09:00 AM

Carpe Diem! This is my favorite daydream...smiles to you, my poe-loving friend.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2001-01-18 09:11 AM

That does it...I'm outta here...{~,^}

carpe diem

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

6 posted 2001-01-18 09:15 AM

I love the rhyme scheme and your lovely words
Poeminister..

~V~

A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

7 posted 2001-01-18 12:52 PM

we are out of here!!!

great one from you Poeminister. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

8 posted 2001-02-28 02:59 PM

Thank you all for reading and enjoying this piece.

Poeminister

Cerenity
Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 2637
Escondido-California

9 posted 2001-03-01 12:55 PM

Hi Poeminister,

What a glorious day you have painted, and finding serenity as a host and just because you can I love that, and posies to,

Love, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

10 posted 2001-03-01 01:33 PM

Soon, I hope to have a day just like this!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

11 posted 2001-03-01 10:00 PM

Cerenity--
Thank you for peeking in...Glad you enjoyed the read.

Kathleen--
And I hope that day comes true for you. Thank you.

take care,
Poeminister

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

12 posted 2001-03-02 11:12 AM

Wise decisions here written very well... I like this very much! *S*

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

13 posted 2001-03-02 03:47 PM

Suthern--Thank you. Glad you enjoyed this.

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

14 posted 2001-03-03 01:40 PM

Now that sounds like a real refreshing trip! When do we get started? Oh you mean... you didn't write this just for me? I... well I.. I'm sorry I just got so carried away...It seemed like such a wonderful way to spend the day...oh well I'll just have to find someone else to fly with sigh.........thanks for the uplifting poem.....ethome

The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges.

athena4
Senior Member

since 2000-12-10

Posts 622

15 posted 2001-03-03 02:32 PM

Poeminister,
Ah, to have such a day! Beautiful...
Elise

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

16 posted 2001-03-03 02:46 PM

Im ready lets go ok?

We all have wings...some of us don't know why

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

17 posted 2001-03-03 05:05 PM

enjoy the read

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