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Touch Me |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA 
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Touch me And in turn I’ll touch you Confide in me And with you I will share the world Reside in me Linger in the center of my thoughts Release me From the wants of anticipation Remember me I am more than a figment of your imagination Want me Because there is very little I have ever wanted more Relax me Exhausting is a mind that runs Make love to me Let me know that what I feel is true Touch me For I am touching you [This message has been edited by spiked (edited 01-18-2001).] |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
I really enjoyed your words rich.. nicely penned..  ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
SPIKED, this poem sure is sweet... I scrolled back up to re-read again and these words I quote just had me sighing... "Reside in me Linger in the center of my thoughts" Splendid poem thank you for the delightful read... *~coco~* |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Rich~ I picture this being said while slow dancing.......very nicely done -SEA |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
"Linger in the center of my thoughts." Priceless line, absolutely priceless! Enjoyed the whole of the poem, too! |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Thank you Victoria, Coco and Vas Sounds like a wonderful addition to the image Sea |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Positively inviting, rich... |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Rich~ I loved this piece, great read, great write...well done ~HUG~ Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
spiked... I really, really liked this... Confide in me And with you I will share the world Reside in me Linger in the center of my thoughts These lines "stuck" in my head most.. Absoultely wonderful pen, Thanks for a great read this morning.. Hugs.... ~LL~ The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
Oops..I forgot to hit me save button... ~LL~The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Thank you Seren, Tracie and LL. Was a very easy write for once. Rich |
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Angel in Flight Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 381 |
Wonderfully said |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Thank you Angel Rich |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
MMMMM the whole poem is so warm and tender and giving...I just like the thought of Touch me |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Thank You Paula, Rich |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
romantic, strongly written... i especially liked these lines, "Remember me I am more than a figment of your imagination" ... enjoyed this one much... thanks for the read |
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