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Open Poetry #12

One More Chance

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

0 posted 2001-01-17 02:50 AM

I only want five
   more minutes
One more I love
   you
One last chance to
   say the words
I'd keep you there
   a little longer
I'd hold you closer
   to my heart
I'd never let you
   say goodbye
Then maybe now there'd
   be no teardrops
Maybe now my heart
   wouldnt break
Maybe now you'd
   be here with me
Instead of dying
   all alone
So all I ask is
   five more minutes
One more whispered
   I love you
One more chance to
   keep you with me
One more one more
   I love you

tracie66
Member Elite

since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

1 posted 2001-01-17 03:01 AM

Incredible longing Paula, beautiful write
~HUGS~
Tracie~

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe

Frankie
Member

since 2001-01-10

Posts 57

2 posted 2001-01-17 01:45 PM

Paula - I love this....anyone in this situation would gladly take five more minutes.

Frankie

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

3 posted 2001-01-17 02:10 PM

Tracie...thank you so much

Frankie...if it were possible yes and yes again five minutes five hours five days...thanks

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

4 posted 2001-01-17 02:23 PM

Paula love, how beautifully you've written this love, utterly wonderfully. You really have laid this out so very very well, it's presentation is excellant dear heart. Hugs and love
Take care love
Mushy

Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning

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