Open Poetry #12 |
The First Hurrah - poetry workshop acrostic |
Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Beginning with....Huh!AsUFO tofuBecomesRobert "Bob" TreborOrRob a loneliness, senile, no laborBecauseAre we not drawn onward to new eraWhereHe maps Spam eh!AndSwen on gnus sung no news.Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Unique way of doing an acrostic. Enjoyed the read! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kethry love, lord does that look complicated, you have managed it wonderfully dear heart. But, and didn't you know that was coming, this is not a challenge I can honestly say I'll give it a shot. The hardest one I tried was Kari's song one, do you remember, good grief love I had to break a sweat. Sooooo tiring dear heart, yes I am terminally lazy, I admit it. However I don't need to because you've obviously, met and matched the challenge and since I wouldn't be able to equal it, I'll applaud instead. (I make a great audience love you know I do!) Fabulous love absolutely fabulous. Take care love Slushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Kethry~ I have no idea how to do this and I think I'll pass as just reading your creative work of art made my head hurt! LOL! This is neat! -SEA |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
WOW and double WOW!!! fantastic acrostic Keth...you did it your way Loved it Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
I must admit I don't understand the whole poem, but I reallt like the way you made its form a unique stem from your style |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Shoot...I thought I had answered this with a "Kethry...write on!" but I am mistaken, I had not done that before NOW.... |
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