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Kethry
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0 posted 2001-03-24 03:58 AM




A
ll honesty to quick, wit could be caustic
Rapid of temper, will be a team member
In all things demure, a heart that is pure
Eternal in aspire and meets their desire
Self moving in creed in word and in deed

The impulse to try but questions asks why
Held by sign of fire, but not in funeral pyre
Exceptional yes! Can work under duress

Results aiming so high doesn't trust the I
All wise as Athena, could live at a marina
More dynamic in charm cannot wish harm




Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.




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Irish Rose
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1 posted 2001-03-24 04:49 AM


This is beautiful, sorry our connection on icq went down, we''ll do it again!

Kathleen Blake

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and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


Kethry
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2 posted 2001-03-24 05:54 AM


Thanks Kathleen,
I don't know what I have done or not done with this double acrostic. It's supposed to be purple with yellow lettering reading Aries the ram at the front and Creed I am at the end. However all I can see is fonts of differing sizes and no color changes. Sorry everyone.
Kethry

Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.



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3 posted 2001-03-24 08:07 AM


WOW!!! Aries the Ram.. That is my creedo. I love it. I will have to add this piece to my library.
Rapid in temper. Who me? No I am never rapid in temper. (Stepping out of the way of a lighting storm heading towards her)
Thank you for this piece.

Love,
Lady

Live in my world just once and you'll find yourself enraptured.


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4 posted 2001-03-26 06:28 PM


Excellent work, Kethry!!!
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5 posted 2001-03-26 11:50 PM


Kethry, It is hard enuf to do the acrostic form with the opening letters and words but to do both opening letters and end letters is super! And you did this well. 2 messages in same piece - my hats off to you. Panne
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6 posted 2001-03-27 08:57 AM


*wow* Kethry ....what a wonderful piece you've penned here. excellent as always my friend.

((hugs))
Charisma

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7 posted 2001-03-27 04:59 PM


Beautifully done here! This definately describes me!!! *bows* thank you everybody.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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