Open Poetry #12 |
Aries the Ram - Creed |
Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Rapid of temper, will be a team membe In all things demure, a heart that is pur Eternal in aspire and meets their desir Self moving in creed in word and in dee Held by sign of fire, but not in funeral pyr Exceptional yes! Can work under dures All wise as Athena, could live at a marin More dynamic in charm cannot wish har Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. [This message has been edited by Kethry (edited 03-24-2001).] |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This is beautiful, sorry our connection on icq went down, we''ll do it again! Kathleen Blake |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Thanks Kathleen, I don't know what I have done or not done with this double acrostic. It's supposed to be purple with yellow lettering reading Aries the ram at the front and Creed I am at the end. However all I can see is fonts of differing sizes and no color changes. Sorry everyone. Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Ladycat
since 1999-07-05
Posts 782At the edge and a doorway,TX |
WOW!!! Aries the Ram.. That is my creedo. I love it. I will have to add this piece to my library. Rapid in temper. Who me? No I am never rapid in temper. (Stepping out of the way of a lighting storm heading towards her) Thank you for this piece. Love, Lady Live in my world just once and you'll find yourself enraptured. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Excellent work, Kethry!!! |
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Panne415 Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 104San Antonio |
Kethry, It is hard enuf to do the acrostic form with the opening letters and words but to do both opening letters and end letters is super! And you did this well. 2 messages in same piece - my hats off to you. Panne |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
*wow* Kethry ....what a wonderful piece you've penned here. excellent as always my friend. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Beautifully done here! This definately describes me!!! *bows* thank you everybody. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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