Open Poetry #12 |
He......... |
SEA
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He is my laughter......to bring light to my day Ever constant friend and confidant The one I run to for safety………….acceptance………….reassurance He is my best friend ~*~ He is my fire…………………..unextinguishable Ever burning in my heart………….in my soul The one who kindles my passion………ignites my desire He is my lover ~*~ He is my match…………..in every way Ever challenging me to keep in stride The one who knows me…………..completely He is my soul mate ~*~ He is my partner…………….for all my life Ever gentle………..loving…………..giving The one I trust completely, as I have no other He is my husband My everything ~SEA~ [This message has been edited by SEA (edited 01-16-2001).] |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
and HE is one lucky guy.... |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Oh, how I love this poem of devotion to your man, your best friend, your husband! It is so wonderful to have that kind of love in a lifetime......many best wishes to you both!! Write on! -<--<--{(@ |
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phoenix New Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 9 |
you are one lucky lady! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
and HE has been inspiring some lovely poetry in you ... me thinks your both very lucky ... love ya in love Sea-girlie this is sincere and sweet later-found your soulmate-gator jm baby can I hold you tonite ... maybe if I said the right words, at the right time ... you'd be mine. baby can I hold you tonite. ~tracy chapman~ |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Beautiful sentiments from a heart that has known the trials before the reward. Wonderful penning and even more wonderful show of love. |
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SEA
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Sunshine~ thank you Sunny1~ it's pretty great, thank you Phoenix~ thank you Janet~ yea, he has a way about him that inspires me......he is one of a kind thank you! Mark~ yes, the trials were brutial......the rewards, beautiful......thank you dear man ~SEA |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked it |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Circe love, You knew I'd love this I know, utterly wonderful. As always seeing how wonderfully you love your partner has me smiling delightedly for you love. This is truly a wonderfully excellant piece. Take care love Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Eloquentia perfecta. Poeminister |
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SEA
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Vandana~ thank you Marsha~ you are so sweet, thank you PM~ I'm so glad you liked this thank you -SEA |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
This is a beautiful tribute to your husband. You and he both are truly blessed to share that kind of love. Wonderful poem. Deb |
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SEA
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Deb~ thank you, I read it to him last night, just after writing it and he loved it -SEA |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
This is beautiful, SEA. I'm looking for poems appropriate to read at my wedding/use in the programs. I'd love to include this in my ceremony. Please email if you are interested. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
SEA, I adore the way you write of the inner feelings of devotion you possess and share towards your loving hubby... ThankU sweetie I enjoyed your poem... *~coco~* |
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SEA
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Tara~ I emailed you........Thank you Coco~ thank you, it's easy when he is as magical as my hubby -SEA |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
The magic is clearly expressed in the loving words you have written....just beautiful Pepper "A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth." Percy Bysshe Shelley |
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SEA
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Thank you Pepper!! -SEA |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
SEA, He... has to be the happiest person on earth. Because your love is real. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
SEA, He... has to be the happiest person on earth. Because your love is real. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
My opinion? - TWO (2) very lucky people: You have each other! - He's got the best of the deal - he's got a poet too~G~ |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
....the dream we all dream of...how wonderful that youve captured it! very sweet write for your dream come true hugs, g "oh baby baby, its a wild world..its hard to get by just upon a smile..." cat stevens |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
What a beautiful dedication to your husband, you are both so blessed! I long for a love like yours. You must submit this for the next passions "Voices On The Web" Book! Or perhaps you could submit this poem to the main site for the world to read! Have you given this to him yet? What a treat it would be for him to receive this poem for valentines day! Take care, Melissa< !signature--> The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams [This message has been edited by Melissa Honeybee (edited 01-17-2001).] |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
I hope you always love him as you do now..he must be a very special man..nicely written Sea..HUGS.. ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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SEA
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DJD~ He is well loved and he knows it! thank you WY~ I feel very lucky, he says he does too.... thank you Dg~ I had to wait a very long time and go through some bad times until this dream came true......it was worth it! thanks Melissa~ he's out there waiting to find you.....it'll happen.....thank you, he brings out the best in me....yes, I read it to him just after I wrote it....I'll have to come up with something else for Valentine's Day thank you Victoria~ he is, and I have loved him for 16 years......intensely......this love will never die, thank you -SEA |
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