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Jonquils
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Jonquils |
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Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
 age-old jonquils bloom fragranted Chomo Lhari a Zen of seeing "I am not now that which I have been." |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Oh but it does a heart good to see a "proper" and beautiful Haiku every so often, just beautiful! |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~I could read this beauty countless times. There's something about the impact these little ones have on me. Almost like I can take the three lines and run with them wherever I please. Enjoying this. *Peace. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
a charming pocket poem.... |
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Katherine Chandler Member
since 2001-03-07
Posts 280Florida, USA |
I simply love jonquils and this Haiku is every bit as lovely.  KatieBlessings Genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
quote: I love this line. . . excellent Julian. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Julian: Just lovely! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
Thanks to all for the comments and encouragement. Haiku formats are some of my favorites. Shalom, Julian "I am not now that which I have been." |
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