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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Petals from a rose Strewn across our scented bed Love in the morning |
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Chelsea~ Member
since 2001-02-09
Posts 260Ontario, CANADA |
paula, this is incredible, so beautiful |
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Jellybean King Member
since 2001-03-07
Posts 153Jelly, Bean |
I loved this haiku...flickers of images from each line are reflected in the next.... Petals from a rose Strewn across our scented bed Love in the morning ...so much so, that I enjoyed reading it with the 1st and 3rd inverted too! Love in the morning Strewn across our scented bed Petals from a rose (sorry, hope you don't mind...just couldn't help myself) ...either way it's just terrific. Jellybean King |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
yes, lovely, just lovely. Kathleen Blake |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Sounds like you went to bed and got really wild after a very romantic evening! You little deviless you.....petals petals everywhere strewn all over the place.....I can imagine what went on! The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges. |
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Panne Junior Member
since 2001-01-31
Posts 15South TX, USA |
Paula, This is a beautiful Senyru. I shows not tells. really enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing this read. Panne |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Paula, Very vivid....yet soft. RMW |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
call me a softie, but i thought of a Jewel song when i read this... "morning song" you evoke so much with so few words... i love your style  You gotta love livin, cause dyin's a pain in the ass. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Paula sister mine, I love this utterly it's utterly fabulous. You do know I love this. Of course you do. Well you know where I am, and remember I'm flying there with you love always. Fabulous work I truly am awed but this dear heart take care love as always Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Paula I think I watched this scene in the movie "American Beauty". James |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Chelsea...Thanks so much Im pleased you found it beautiful Jellybean King...lol no I dont mind...I like it when something I write makes someone else play with the words...love your name BTW... Kathleen sweet rose...I thought you might like this one...thanks ethome...LOL and just whats going on in that mind of yours you naughty thing? HAHAHA!!! You know I'm innocent dont ya? Panne...I'm glad you could see the image...thank you RMW...theres not to many things softer than a rose petal...thank you vandana...good Im glad you did...thank you Ethan...well hey there...good to have you back again...Ive missed you...thanks for your sweet words Hi my sis...here you are again...making me feel as if I truly can write LOL...you are such a gift...thank you James...well I have to admit Ive never seen that movie...does make a lovely image tho...thanks sweet friend |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Beautiful, romantic image. This is very nice. |
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