Open Poetry #12 |
Rage |
Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
I RAGE AGAINST FATE AND I SCREAM OUT YOUR SWEET NAME BUT NOBODY HEARS |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Paula~ It's hard I know and it really hurts like hell and nothing I can say will ease your pain hon but know that I am here and I hear you....Let it all out ~HUGS~ Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
now THIS i can relate to. this i like. very smooth. "shots in the dark are from empty guns, never heard by anyone" awesome work on this one. Everyone's got their demons. We all got somethin' to atone for. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Powerful and full of heartache, hugs to you - SEA |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Paula love, I'm there right there with you. Shout all you wish love. This is so powerful dear heart. Take care always Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
oh paula..... *sigh* i know i'm not the one you want to hear..but i hear you...deeper than you know... i ache with only a portion of your pain as i read..but i share it with you and hope it eases the feeling..just a bit... i know it hurts so much to lose one you love... "into every life a little rain must fall...and losing one you love is like a storm...but storms are passing..." michael w. smith hugs to your heart my friend..g "oh baby baby, its a wild world..its hard to get by just upon a smile..." cat stevens |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Rage has to be turned loose, and screaming is the best way. When your throat is sore, and you can't scream any longer, than your heart will heal.......and we will be here for you, my twin..... Write on! -<--<--{(@ |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Paula, you're in my thoughts PoetFriend... Hugs2u *~coco~* |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Tracie...thank you for your love and concern Ethan...well Im not sure if relating is a good thing or not thanks Sea...thanks for the hugs they are most welcome Marsha...and you being here has kept me sane thanks just isnt enough dgvarner...it does help knowing someone hears this pain...thank you Sunny girl...I know you are here my twin and that helps thanks Coco..thank you so much |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh Paula, you know I have been there, and sometimes screaming is the only way to let out the pain. Take care, I understand. Sandra |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Oh, I can feel the pain in here! It is sad when you feel lost, and you just have to scream a cry for help in order to have someone finally notice your pain. I've been through this all the time. But fear not, love and light overcomes all, and love will be the medicine that heals the heartache. Excellent haiku, thank you for sharing, my friend! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
yes, you said it. Someone to hear the pain, that's it, that's it, that's all we can do, if we scream and no one hears how can we help anyone? I'm going to post a poem for you I hope you don't mind. Kathleen |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Sandra...yes I know you know...and Ive screamed til my throat is raw...and still I rage Noah...its not the feeling of being lost...its what I lost that causes the pain...thank you Irish Rose...your poem was lovely and very comforting and again I thank you for your love and concern |
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