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Forward and Beyond....Mini Thoughts
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Forward and Beyond....Mini Thoughts |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Forward and Beyond...Mini Thoughts Uncontrollable are my thoughts as I breathe in your scent, feel the texture of you within and when love calls amid the shades of night fold into arms of one. Night warms my tapestry of thoughts, sleepness in my want of you as silhouettes cast their seduction, shadowing, under the light of passion lacing my memory, as I drift unto you. Stirring the night you extend to me your love, tender of heart. Born behind doors of my mind are sensual pleasures awaiting to adorn you in the darkness of my world. Take me back frame me in stillness of yesterday, place me upon your ledge embracing my edges with fine touch, gilding me in desire. Restore me to my use-to-be, adding to me the pleasures of your reign upon my myst and as the shadows fade and the day hides the moon rise me, move me forward and beyond... ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
Wynter, Someone is very fortunate to receive such uncontrollable devotion. Melton |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Wynter~ Absolutely beautiful ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
............wow..........I liked each one very much........wonderful!  SEA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nakd, I agree with Marge, this one is a keeper. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
such fine sentiment i like yuh |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Melton I am devoted to anyone I love, you just always wish it in return, thank you Marge thank you, trying Marge, trying to keep my positive attitude and on rainy, lonely days like this it isn't easy SEA thank you, I was going to make it a full poem but I didn't like the order of the verses so thought it better to make them individual thoughts....I am pleased with it *S Sy aww and it was kind of an early morning thought...just came to me ..thank you Walt for some reason I love your responses...they seem so soft-toned...yuh  ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
wonderful Wynter. . . thank you for sharing your thoughts with us. . . ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Very unique and interesting. Sensually seductive also. I liked the idea(s). |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Sven & Poetic Knight thank you both...sensual I like to write when in the mood...seductive well I am not too sure... ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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