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nakdthoughts
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0 posted 2001-03-21 07:39 AM



Forward and Beyond...Mini Thoughts

Uncontrollable
are my thoughts
as I breathe in your scent,
feel the texture of you within
and when love calls amid the shades of night
fold into arms of one.


Night warms
my tapestry of thoughts,
sleepness in my want of you
as silhouettes cast their seduction,
shadowing, under the light of passion
lacing my memory, as I drift unto you.


Stirring the night
you extend to me your love,
tender of heart.
Born behind doors of my mind
are sensual pleasures
awaiting to adorn you
in the darkness of my world.

Take me back
frame me in stillness of yesterday,
place me upon your ledge
embracing my edges
with fine touch,
gilding me in desire.

Restore me
to my use-to-be,
adding to me the pleasures
of your reign upon my myst
and as the shadows fade
and the day hides the moon
rise me, move me forward
and beyond...


~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



© Copyright 2001 Wynter Bliss - All Rights Reserved
2dalimit
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1 posted 2001-03-21 07:46 AM


Wynter,
Someone is very fortunate to receive such uncontrollable devotion.
Melton

Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2001-03-21 07:55 AM


Wynter~
Absolutely beautiful !
~*Marge*~

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SEA
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with you
3 posted 2001-03-21 09:04 AM


............wow..........I liked each one very much........wonderful! SEA
Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2001-03-21 09:09 AM


Nakd,
I agree with Marge, this one is a keeper.

wayoutwalt
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5 posted 2001-03-21 09:48 AM


such fine sentiment i like yuh
nakdthoughts
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6 posted 2001-03-21 07:21 PM


Melton
I am devoted to anyone I love, you just always wish it in return, thank you

Marge
thank you, trying Marge, trying to keep my positive attitude and on rainy, lonely days like this it isn't easy

SEA
thank you, I was going to make it a full poem but I didn't like the order of the verses so thought it better to make them individual thoughts....I am pleased with it *S

Sy
aww and it was kind of an early morning thought...just came to me ..thank you

Walt
for some reason I love your responses...they seem so soft-toned...yuh

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



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7 posted 2001-03-21 08:20 PM


wonderful Wynter. . .

thank you for sharing your thoughts with us. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

PoeticKnight
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8 posted 2001-03-22 08:46 AM


Very unique and interesting. Sensually seductive also. I liked the idea(s).
nakdthoughts
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9 posted 2001-03-26 08:40 AM


Sven
&
Poetic Knight

thank you both...sensual I like to write when in the mood...seductive well I am not too sure...

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



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