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wayoutwalt
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

0 posted 2001-03-20 10:56 PM

Picture perfect
With lines that can’t be seen
I don’t think she knows
How pretty she may be
She seems contained
But then she'll break free
The frame is just for show
Where I watch in the gallery
There she is, free to go
I try to lift her up
But she’s lighter than I thought
My thoughts were that
She can’t be read
No, not on a wall
She’s perfect like a picture
But she’s six feet tall
I saw in the news
How they stole another piece
I don’t have her
I didn’t even set her free
I saw her walking on the clouds
Please hurry
Before she gets away
Did I take her?
No, it’s impossible
But indeed
I have been framed

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-03-20 11:10 PM

Walt~ I like this very much

SEA

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2001-03-21 09:45 AM

Well...well...well....another smile....

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

3 posted 2001-03-21 10:20 AM

Some very fresh ideas in this one. I really like it, but I do find myself wanting to know more. Maybe that's exactly what you're trying to do...provide intrigue and desire. If so, it's working.

Mother_Earth
Senior Member

since 2000-11-20

Posts 1370
1/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan

4 posted 2001-03-21 12:21 PM

wayoutwalt, I am sure I see something different than you wanted me to see, but it is beauty to my eyes so I will keep it! Thank you, sir. ME

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

5 posted 2001-03-21 01:27 PM

Ok, I've been framed too! But guess what! I broke free and well, here I am
in living color. I loved this.

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

6 posted 2001-03-22 03:39 PM

Love your idea's here Walty

very clever

I loved it

Maree

I may know the word but not say it
I may know the truth but not face it
I may hear a sound a whisper sacred and profound
but turn my head indifferent

Natalie Merchant

[This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 03-22-2001).]

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