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catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone

0 posted 2001-03-20 06:57 PM


Through many twisted tortured paths
comes love with questions-Can it last?
With much ado and little ease
yet love is all we need to breathe.

So here's a toast to love so grand
We'll clink our glasses, touch our hands
and hope with all we hold inside
this one will last through all of time..

© Copyright 2001 Sandra - All Rights Reserved
SEA
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with you
1 posted 2001-03-20 07:05 PM




"So here's a toast to love so grand
We'll clink our glasses, touch our hands
and hope with all we hold inside
this one will last through all of time.."
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I had a night like this, about 7 years ago......love does last.......when it's right. SEA

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2 posted 2001-03-20 07:18 PM


~Pleased to see that hope S. I love this little love poem. Yes! I do. Nice to know that your thoughts are happy ones if but for a moment,...let's pray they last. *Peace you.
athena4
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3 posted 2001-03-20 07:30 PM


Sandra,
Beautifully written sentiments. I think we have to "go back in time", to find a love that will last for all time...
Love, Elise

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4 posted 2001-03-20 08:35 PM


sometimes yes. . . but what about "going forward in time"??

wonderful Sandra. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
5 posted 2001-03-21 09:09 AM


Sweet....
nakdthoughts
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6 posted 2001-03-21 10:16 AM


Sandra, I enjoyed your words and sometimes a little goes a long way *s huggz

~Wynter/M

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



vandana
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7 posted 2001-03-21 10:55 AM


enjoy your read
Sunnyone
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8 posted 2001-03-21 10:57 AM


Ok.......no one I know can write them like this........you always get me hooked in the first couple of lines! Love it, and keep smiling!!

Live...Love...Be grateful for both!!




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