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The ABC's of You ................... |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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Although you don't know it Between then and now I've Changed, I've grown up Despite the fact that you trampled my Emotions, tore up my heart, I Faced the reality that you are Gone, and are never coming back…….a Hard reality once, now Insignificant to my life Just wish somehow you knew because Knowing what I know now about Love, shows me that you never loved Me at all Now I know all those years were a lie Once I worshiped you, did anything to be near Patiently waiting for a chance, never Questioning why I was never good enough Really sad when I remember the girl I was Stars in my eyes blocked out the Truth Understanding now what my innocence couldn't Vision clear and heart healed, I've stopped Wishing for the sound of your voice ~ with Xperiencing real love and true friendship Your memory fades away, any Zeal I once had for you…………………gone. ~SEA~ |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
So cool!!!!! And it read like it was written effortlessly...I like that. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Circe dear heart, this is truly outstanding writing. And he was sooooo not worthy, rise up through love and you will come shining through. I love this it's truly wonderful, I really love the way you've written this. Excellent work I don't ge the chance to spend much time on here of late but when I do I try to reply to the best of the best. Love to you dear heart take care love as always Mushy  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
And yet so many times you must have hoped it would have been a true love...and still hold onto a piece of hope...hard to let go of hope...James |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Once I worshiped you, did anything to be near Patiently waiting for a chance, never Questioning why I was never good enough Really sad when I remember the girl I was Stars in my eyes blocked out the Truth Understanding now what my innocence couldn't Vision clear and heart healed, I've stopped Wishing for the sound of your voice ================ Look at me Sea-girlie playing with poetry... way cool me ABC-SEA-gator, what a creative spin on an acrostic (all that home schooling inspiration) LOL great write. oh you speak to me in riddles |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
SEA, the most I can muster is "Wow!" ~ this is terrific ~ the endline, a powerful punch. Very well done! Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau [This message has been edited by Meadowmuse (edited 03-20-2001).] |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'Questioning why I was never good enough Really sad when I remember the girl I was Stars in my eyes blocked out the Truth Understanding now what my innocence couldn't Vision clear and heart healed, I've stopped Wishing for the sound of your voice ~ with Xperiencing real love and true friendship Your memory fades away, any Zeal I once had for you…………………gone.' Oh, do I love this one! Quite creative with a FANTASTIC message!! How I relate to this one...great write, SEA!! sp  to be with you... |
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Just A Woman Senior Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 507 |
I applaud! Wonderful. To keep such an easy flow through this takes talent!  "When people show you who they are, believe them" |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ You may go to the head of the class ! Wonderful, gal ! Seemingly conveyed so easily.  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I alpha-BET that nobody can do this as well, SEA! This is great! |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
JLR~ Thank you, It came together pretty fast Marsha~ I've missed you!Thank you sweetie! I'll be on the lookout for ya James~ of course I hoped...but you can only be second best and not good enough for so long........right? Janet~ Thank you so much! ( yea, I started my day in school mode~ as always) Claire~ "wow" is great! thank you SP~ Thank you very much! Just A Woman~ Thank You Marge~ thank you!! Balladeer~ Thank you so much ~SEA |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
"xperiencing" ? LOL...I was wondering how you were gonna do the X. Very creative stuff here. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
PK~ yea that X was a hard one for me........I had to improvise Thanks SEA |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
You clever, clever girl.... loved this SEA!!! |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
thank you sweet Serenity SEA |
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