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Possum
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since 2001-03-20
Posts 23


0 posted 2001-03-20 02:15 PM


I will write the painful words
Until the letters make my eyes bleed
I have seen them all before
Their twisted little bodies
Teasing and taunting me as they dance
from line to line
But I cannot stop this pen
As its ink is its mind
I am simply its slave
Here for its pleasure
For it to punish all my crimes
Even if I close my eyes
And break all my fingers
This pen will still write
And my brain, heart and soul
Will feel the torture of this time

© Copyright 2001 Possum - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
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1 posted 2001-03-20 02:26 PM


Amazing how sometimes we think the pens and quills take on a life of their own....and we are just the conduit...

but it really all stems....

from you....

Celeste
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since 2000-11-11
Posts 597

2 posted 2001-03-20 02:38 PM


Welcome, Possum. I missed your entrance. But I really liked this poem. Will look forward to reading more from you!

The greatest part of a writer's time is spent in reading, in order to write; a man will turn over half a library to make one book.
~Samuel Johnson~

thecraig
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since 2001-03-11
Posts 223

3 posted 2001-03-21 03:48 AM


Ink cartridges are expensive. Please use the keyboard when your hand hurt's, When the words come right them . Do not try when you may churn pain & anquish. Please take care. Your health is your healing ambition.
vandana
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4 posted 2001-03-21 11:26 AM


welcome to passions enjoy
Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06
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5 posted 2001-03-21 01:29 PM


Yes, eyes can bleed, mine have and been so bloodshot I couldn't see in front of me, but in my mind and heart the words live. It's amazing the words you wrote, they are real to me. THank you
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