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0 posted 2001-03-19 09:51 PM


Silkened
By: Noah Eaton
3/19/01

My frosted heart, lightly frozen in the winter of my yearning for you
Thaws as I hear my angel sing in rapture, rain of Venus showering my soul
My eyes soften in tears as my body lightens, pulling me close to her
Silkened in her desire

Flouncing in Aphrodite’s wind, Her ethereal breath brings me to her
Her warm spring breath alluring me into her arms at last
My feeble arms and legs can’t move
Silkened in her voice

Her eyes open to me like budding roses, more gorgeous than rubies
Roseate lips sighing in eternal prom dance
My dove angel’s face balmed in the sunshine, my love purely glistening, lighting my smile
Silkened in her beauty

I hold her velvet soul in my hands, as she touches my heart
Satin whispers ricochet through my ears, heating in passions flame setting my heart aflame
Her goddess wings wrapped around me, her healing caress erasing all my worries
Silkened in her purity

Her lips kiss mine, closing my eyes, I know there is a god
Thanking Him for giving me this angel, holding heaven to my heart
Lips attached, tongues touching gently, a tear falls down my cheek, my blessing to God
Silkened with joy

Holding her hand, wherever eternity’s winds take us
I feel my heart light, keeping me warm everyday
My heart beats on, jumping like a happy boy at recess
Silkened in her love…


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1 posted 2001-03-19 10:35 PM


Beautiful, image filled poetry....I am impressed. I sent you an e-mail regarding this one.

*Krista Knutson*

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Can't hide I can't fly
I'm struggling with the limits of this ordinary life..." ~Tracy Chapman

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2 posted 2001-03-20 08:30 PM


I found myself so drawn into this, just beautiful..... be well my friend....


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3 posted 2001-03-21 07:03 PM


Noah, you can pull the most wonderful images with your words. . .

excellent. . .

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