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When Night Comes
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When Night Comes |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
When Night Comes By Richard Maxfield 7-16-2000 When night comes Heartbreak falls I find myself Against the wall My soul cries out In acing pain Longing for love Yet once again Lonely in the dark I think of love Warmth of a wife From heaven above Where are you my love Come running to me Forever in my arms Love’s dawn we’ll see Even though I don’t know Who you might be I love you forever This you’ll see My heart is yours For eternity to keep Dream in daytime Thinking of you in sleep I’m waiting, wanting Only for you What more can This lonely man do |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah Max...good luck... |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
I hope that you find one who will appreciate you. One who will not take light your hearts desire. Good Luck!!! |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Max, I also hope you find the one you waiting for....good luck and a wonderful, heartfelt write! Nathan |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Dream in daytime Thinking of you in sleep ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ MAX, this poem is so adoring and the quote above just captures the essence so well... Thankyou for the splendid read this morning.. coco |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
looking into my crystal ball..lady victoria sees all and she knows all...i see a lady for you...she is standing in a black tight dress at the perfume counter at Dillards..tell her i sent you haa...  A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
Sunshine thank you for your comment and taking the time to read my poem. Love and light, Richard inot2B thanky you friend for your best wishes. Love and light, Richard Nate, Thank you for your comment and wishes. I know she is out there some where. Love and light, Richard Coco Thank you for your wonderful comment my friend. Love and light, Richard Victoria, dang I live in Dallas and its a big city. We have 4 Dillards and I have been all over town asking. The store dective asked me to leave. Maybe I was at the wrong one? Any help would be very pleasing to me. LOL this brought such a smile and laugh. Thank you sweet heart. Love and light, Richard PS I'm still thinking about the black shhh haaa myself. |
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