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Give Me Your Heart
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Give Me Your Heart |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind 
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Promises made at twilight Of love and desire On the beach under Diamond light Where still I sleep As I slip slowly into Your ecstasy, slowly where You pull me close to your body Penetrating my soul with touch Standing on the edge of passion The winds gently surround us Watching moonlight fall Across the sea & love elevates On the ocean breeze, as Waves tumble silently As the stars are Placed across midnights hue I lay with you Face to face Whispering softly Give me your heart and I will hold your soul *** "Within you I lose myself |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Where still I sleep As I slip slowly into Your ecstasy, slowly where You pull me close to your body Penetrating my soul with touch Standing on the edge of passion The winds gently surround us Watching moonlight fall Across the sea & love elevates On the ocean breeze, as Waves tumble silently As the stars are Placed across midnights hue I lay with you Face to face Whispering softly Give me your heart and I will hold your soul =================== my oh my... this is so delicate and lovely wonderful sensual, sigh--soft poetry GE ... your flow is as calming as a summers night breeze I think if I picked up a shell on that beach you just wrote of ... I might hear this poem  take care gentle poetess jm We wish ourselves beautiful, |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GreenEyes~ LOVE your twilight musing ! 'Standing on the edge of passion' Yep ... does it for me ! JUMPING IN !  Beautifully done, poet dear. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Greeneyes, Softly sensual and quite lovely. Thank you for sharing this. Michael Proust- |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) So sweet and passionate! You write the beauty and purity of love so very well! May true love forever shine in your heart! You have such a beautiful heart, dear friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
JM~ my best memories are those on the beach, I have them to hold always....thank you for always understanding my words...it means much to me.....  be well Marge~ jump in....good to see your smile my friend....thank you for sharing it with me.... Michael~ it means much that you did enjoy this...and thank you for letting me.... MA~ such a kind response, makes writing all worthwhile....I thank you sincerely.... be well all....  Greeneyes~ *** "Within you I lose myself |
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Red-uni Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 192Georgia, USA |
Beautifully written. Red |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I'm at a loss for words. . . *sigh*. . . ------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
It's stunning, giving your heart is an act of trust.........guard it well, sweet lady! Kathleen Blake |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I like the thoughts and desires of this..James |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
as you have in the past - and did just now with this = keep blessing me (us) wityj such expressopns of yourself - I will always read, love and enjoy - you DO write from your heart! |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Red-uni~ Good to see a GA face in the crowd.... I live in MN but grew up southern....thank you for stopping to read my words... be well...Greeneyes~ *** "Within you I lose myself |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Sven~ you make writing worth the effort..for not only the writer, but the reader as well..in such appreciation of you...thank you....  Greeneyes~ *** "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 03-21-2001).] |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Kathleen~ oh you have added such a smile to my face....I hope all is well with you... hugs my friend for your kindness.... Greeneyes~ *** "Within you I lose myself |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
vandana~ thank you for telling me you enjoyed... Greeneyes~ *** "Within you I lose myself |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
JM~ thank you my friend, for telling me you enjoyed.... Bill~from one writer to another writer, from one lover of poetry to another.....I thankyou....I adore ya hon... Greeneyes~ *** Be well all.... "Within you I lose myself |
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