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Greeneyes
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0 posted 2001-03-19 06:23 PM



Promises made at twilight
Of love and desire
On the beach under
Diamond light

Where still I sleep
As I slip slowly into
Your ecstasy, slowly where
You pull me close to your body
Penetrating my soul with touch

Standing on the edge of passion
The winds gently surround us
Watching moonlight fall
Across the sea & love elevates
On the ocean breeze, as
Waves tumble silently

As the stars are
Placed across midnights hue
I lay with you
Face to face

Whispering softly

Give me your heart and
I will hold your soul


***

"Within you I lose myself
Without you I find myself
Wanting to be lost again."
-Unknown



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Janet Marie
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1 posted 2001-03-19 07:06 PM


Where still I sleep
As I slip slowly into
Your ecstasy, slowly where
You pull me close to your body
Penetrating my soul with touch

Standing on the edge of passion
The winds gently surround us
Watching moonlight fall
Across the sea & love elevates
On the ocean breeze, as
Waves tumble silently

As the stars are
Placed across midnights hue
I lay with you
Face to face

Whispering softly

Give me your heart and
I will hold your soul
===================

my oh my...
this is so delicate and lovely
wonderful sensual, sigh--soft poetry GE ...
your flow is as calming as a summers night breeze
I think if I picked up a shell on that beach you just wrote of ...
I might hear this poem
take care gentle poetess
jm

We wish ourselves beautiful,
we cry in the night.
Its not the love you fear ...
its the fall from the height.
~Edwin McCain~

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2 posted 2001-03-19 07:44 PM


GreenEyes~
LOVE your twilight musing !

'Standing on the edge of passion'

Yep ... does it for me !
JUMPING IN !
Beautifully done, poet dear.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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By the sea
3 posted 2001-03-19 08:14 PM


Greeneyes,

Softly sensual and quite lovely. Thank you for sharing this.

Michael

Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2001-03-19 08:32 PM


(sigh) So sweet and passionate! You write the beauty and purity of love so very well! May true love forever shine in your heart! You have such a beautiful heart, dear friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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5 posted 2001-03-20 08:40 PM


JM~ my best memories are those on the beach, I have them to hold always....thank you for always understanding my words...it means much to me..... be well


Marge~ jump in....good to see your smile my friend....thank you for sharing it with me....


Michael~ it means much that you did enjoy this...and thank you for letting me....


MA~ such a kind response, makes writing all worthwhile....I thank you sincerely....
be well all....


Greeneyes~


***


"Within you I lose myself
Without you I find myself
Wanting to be lost again."
-Unknown



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6 posted 2001-03-21 12:19 PM


Beautifully written.
Red

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7 posted 2001-03-21 01:07 PM


I'm at a loss for words. . .

*sigh*. . .

-------------------------------------------------------------

To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Irish Rose
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8 posted 2001-03-21 01:11 PM


It's stunning, giving your heart is an act of trust.........guard it well, sweet lady!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


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9 posted 2001-03-21 05:31 PM


enjoy
JamesMichael
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10 posted 2001-03-21 06:08 PM


I like the thoughts and desires of this..James
Wilfred Yeats
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11 posted 2001-03-21 06:19 PM


as you have in the past - and did just now with this = keep blessing me (us) wityj such expressopns of yourself - I will always read, love and enjoy - you DO write from your heart!
Greeneyes
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12 posted 2001-03-21 11:15 PM


Red-uni~ Good to see a GA face in the crowd.... I live in MN but grew up southern....thank you for stopping to read my words... be well...


Greeneyes~

***

"Within you I lose myself
Without you I find myself
Wanting to be lost again."
-Unknown



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13 posted 2001-03-21 11:19 PM


Sven~ you make writing worth the effort..for not only the writer, but the reader as well..in such appreciation of you...thank you....
Greeneyes~


***


"Within you I lose myself
Without you I find myself
Wanting to be lost again."
-Unknown


[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 03-21-2001).]

Greeneyes
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14 posted 2001-03-21 11:22 PM


Kathleen~ oh you have added such a smile to my face....I hope all is well with you... hugs my friend for your kindness....


Greeneyes~


***

"Within you I lose myself
Without you I find myself
Wanting to be lost again."
-Unknown



Greeneyes
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15 posted 2001-03-21 11:59 PM


vandana~ thank you for telling me you enjoyed...


Greeneyes~


***

"Within you I lose myself
Without you I find myself
Wanting to be lost again."
-Unknown



Greeneyes
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16 posted 2001-03-22 07:08 PM


JM~ thank you my friend, for telling me you enjoyed....


Bill~from one writer to another writer, from one lover of poetry to another.....I thankyou....I adore ya hon...


Greeneyes~


***


Be well all....

"Within you I lose myself
Without you I find myself
Wanting to be lost again."
-Unknown



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