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Jellybean King
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since 2001-03-07

Posts 153
Jelly, Bean

0 posted 2001-03-19 02:19 PM

(Congratulations in advance to anyone who makes it to the end of this!)

O Night!
SilkYounGrooMaiden
NodSleepYawninGrasSnake
EntranceDooMeadoWooLake

TogetheRounDresStonEmbraces
StatueShadoWonderlusTOtheRoads
SnarLovelYolKnifEnchantress
SinGhosTaleSongs

SpilLamBlooDrinKingsmeNot?
TastEvergreeNearlYouthfuLife
EntereDarKnighTOpeNOtheReDoor
RuiNeitheRaiNoRose

HeRoseSmelLikEveninGreen
NoOnEasilYounGratefuLove
EcstacYoUnderstand?
DanceSwelLikEasteRice
EnjoYourselFeasTonight

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Interpretation:

O Night!
(What a Night!)

SilkYounGrooMaiden
(A youthful virgin bride [skin like silk])

NodSleepYawninGrasSnake
(Lays sleeping like a snake in the grass)

EntranceDooMeadoWooLake
(Doom enters the meadow at Wool Lake [purely fictitious place])

TogetheRounDresStonEmbraces
(The virgin bride is tied to a stone altar)

StatueShadoWonderlusTOtheRoads
(Statues cast shadows, wandering to unknown places)

SnarLovelYolKnifEnchantress
(A scary and lovely high priestess [enchantress] enters with a heavy knife around her neck [heavy like a yolk])

SinGhosTaleSongs
(She sings ghostly songs)

SpilLamBlooDrinKingsmeNot?
("Kings Men, will you not drink the blood of this innocent/pure virgin?")

TastEvergreeNearlYouthfuLife
(This virgin's blood will make you youthful [be young forever, evergreen])

EntereDarKnighTOpeNOtheReDoor
(A dark knight enters, and implores them to spare her life [red door = knife wounds])

RuiNeitheRaiNoRose
(Her life is spared [rain = life force, rose = youth/beauty])

HeRoseSmelLikEveninGreen
(How beautiful she is [rose = youth/beauty, evening green = fresh)

NoOnEasilYounGratefuLove
(To save her life was not an easy thing for the dark knight to do [the dark knight is reminding her of this]; she is gratefully in love with him)

EcstacYoUnderstand?
(The dark knight takes her for his own pleasures)

DanceSwelLikEasteRice
(They dance the dance of love, and she becomes pregnant with his child [swell = with child, Easter = rebirth/resurrection, rice = fertility])

EnjoYourselFeasTonight
(A happy ending for all [everyone is feasting and happy])

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

1 posted 2001-03-19 02:48 PM

Well I must need help as I understood it before you explained it, and trust me when it came to the snake part you had my full attention, Yikes! This was fun, but my goodness, you have too much time on your hands - he he, awesome job on this Sir Jelly!

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2001-03-19 02:51 PM

Whew...

jellybeans
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since 2000-10-13

Posts 2298

3 posted 2001-03-19 03:19 PM

well i must need help, cause even with the explanation...lol (gottcha, thought I was gonna say I didn't get it huh?)..it made me smile

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2001-03-21 08:23 PM

I really liked this one. . . I'm always up for poetry that makes you think. . .

a fine experiment. . . do you have more??

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Meadowmuse
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since 1999-12-27

Posts 3263

5 posted 2001-03-21 09:38 PM

JellyBKing, neat Xperimentation. I daresay the intrigue and exploration of the work as a whole may have been even greater without so detailed an interpretation, but even so, this is grand. Thanks for it.

Claire

Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

6 posted 2001-03-22 01:39 AM

Well geez did you really HAVE to do that to me? Dont you know what time I come read here? LOL no seriously this was great...and yes I did make it to the end...and understood before your equally lovely, tho easier to read, explanation...

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