Open Poetry #12 |
Unseen Words |
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Unseen Words I live in a space of beauty, mind watching everything that enters, searching for the unknown in my own private language littering the land with words of real wanting to please. in shades of green, my eyes drink to taste, to tie my thoughts to waiting lips releasing in kiss to a world alive and brittle wondering, wanting all that I have missed... love's blessing the unconditional of mother to child the delight in eyes that are discovering new tiny hands held in large teaching me showing me how to trust after all if ever I had it to do again I would selfishly want more give more love more and open up to receiving more... I have been nothing more than unseen feelings, having paused in time staging my emotions but whose act has now come to a close. and I thank you all... ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Wynter, this sounds like a goodbye......I hope not, as I truly enjoy your works. This is a wonderful poem from you....I enjoyed reading it this morning! Live...Love...Be grateful for both!! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nakd, Good thoughts, good words, good poem. *L* |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Sunnyone, am contemplating it...just have lost some of my feelings at the moment...wondering if poetry helps or hinders me..but I thank you for your nice thoughts...*s SY...what can I say..just when I don't expect to see you, there you are...thank you, your comments make me feel my words have some worth...huggzz for that "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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