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At My Window Again
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At My Window Again |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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At My Window Again we are here by my window again learning nature's comprehend watching red sunrise 'pon robin's breast and blue of sky on old Jay's crest advent of song casts away the last vestige of winter's gray softly they sing to grass blades fine come to ring in spring, sublime eyeing about for perfect nest as promise of birth encompasses earth exacting nature's test feel the pull? feel the magical feel of full? how like the birds, hear me sing from the touch that you bring 'tis not just God's creatures that treasure this day but I too know why the winter's blown away for a promise lies deep in the wet well of spring a sweet coming together that all who love, brings |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Very Nice, I sense the pull of spring in this; Gloom |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ As Spring jumps across the lawn - you capture it perfectly. I like the view !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
sweet tender entrance into the joy of spring |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Great poem, I feel that I'm by your window. A quarter of a century must pass, for the writer to understand what and why he writes. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
What beautiful pictures your words share... I like this one lots! *S* |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
I've had enough of winter too I'm with you all the way  |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
A sweet coming together, Lovely words. A a day keeps the world 'gBernie Bernie Slicker |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
looking for that first robin. . .  wonderful my friend. . . ---------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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