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One Day Soon
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One Day Soon |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
One Day Soon It’s there…all around you the pain you feel…surrounding the outside of you you wear it like a cloak as if to ward off a chill But it is her cold hand which has placed this pain within your heart…around your spirit The drawn look about you…almost as if a mask, tugs at my heart…saddens my being Waiting in the wings for a love you believed to be real, has diminished your zest for living…you’ve now only time to wait…for her call…with the hope that she’ll call One day soon…a promise you hold on to…the reason you breathe the reason you cry long into the lonely night… Your suffering seems tireless…living…breathing… in the memory of the last time she laid her hand upon your heart… promising…one day soon…. May your dreams always dance to the rhythm of a lover's heartbeat... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A good poem about hope...James |
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Raindrops Junior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 15 |
Oh my,so many many memories. You reach this one so very well. Always waiting for the call that never comes. I hope yours rings much more than mine. Best wishes Rosemary |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Well written with great expression |
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