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The Life I Knew
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The Life I Knew |
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Katherine Chandler Member
since 2001-03-07
Posts 280Florida, USA 
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The Life I Knew.. The life I knew was somewhat dark, Then you came along and added spark. A ray of sunshine, a bright new moon, Your love and mine has begun to bloom. It seems so soon to feel heart’s beating, We haven’t had our first real meeting. The time has come when we will kiss And share the joy of contented bliss. I know inside I’ll be a-flutter, With words that you may quietly utter. I’ll be all smiles and feel brand new, The day you feel the same way too. Genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood. T S Eliot |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Oh the flutterbys of love....ah, but they make my heart sing! Great job Kate. |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Yes, you will. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Very nice, romantic, and provokes that anticapatory feeling that is so great. Sandra |
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Katherine Chandler Member
since 2001-03-07
Posts 280Florida, USA |
Thank you all for your kind compliments, they are always appreciated.  Genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
You have summed it up very nicely and it is important that two share the same feelings....James |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Katherine, this felt so comfy', I couldn't help myself, I had to offer another verse. Hope you don't mind. -------- And then perhaps we'll dance away, Awhile sweet nothings we will say. Each to each in the other's ear, All those things we want to hear. -------- Krawdad |
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Katherine Chandler Member
since 2001-03-07
Posts 280Florida, USA |
James, it's always nice when two people feel the same and treat each other the same. Krawdad.. thank you for the added verse and it is so lovely too.. with your permission I may just add that to the poem. It's always a pleasure to have someone whisper sweet nothings in one's ear. Be blessed! Genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood. |
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Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
Katie, loved the poem. Now for the question: do you have the fella all picked out or is this divining him into being? "I am not now that which I have been." |
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Katherine Chandler Member
since 2001-03-07
Posts 280Florida, USA |
Julian, I'm sorry to say that was last year's pick and the crop failed miserably. I'm going to throw some fertilizer on this year's crop. LOL ~You make me laugh You bless my heart You're been my friend From the very start~ ~Katie~  Genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood. T S Eliot [This message has been edited by Katherine Chandler (edited 03-18-2001).] |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
hopefully, you can get something better to grow this year!!  wonderful Katherine. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Very well written, Katherine. Better luck this year!! Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Katherine Chandler Member
since 2001-03-07
Posts 280Florida, USA |
Thank you dear, I'm hoping this year I have better luck. Kate (PrincessPout)Genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I like the nervous anticipation of this one... Well done! *S* (And good luck on the new crop! LOL) |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
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Katherine Chandler Member
since 2001-03-07
Posts 280Florida, USA |
Suthern, thanks so much for the laugh..I have a real strong feeling that the crop will have improved come summer. I'm gonna feed em love! KateSunshine, thanks for stopping by and given the crop some sun, they're gonna need it! Blessings.. Kate  Genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood. |
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