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Katherine Chandler
Member

since 2001-03-07

Posts 280
Florida, USA

0 posted 2001-03-17 12:31 PM

Will You Love Me?

Will you love me
When I'm so vulnerable
To your touch
And loving words..

Will you breathe new life
Into a soul that has
Searched endlessly
For just ONE good man..

Will you be understanding
When my moods change
And my doubtful mind is
Surrounded in darkness..

Will you love me unconditionally
Allowing me my glaring shortcomings
That tend to rule my mind
With all the wrong words..

Will you accept my imperfect body
Knowing it is not the whole of me.
Will you tell me it's inner beauty
You seek and nothing more..

Will you make me smile
When the inner child in me
Needs a good laugh
And positive strokes..

Will you hold my hand
Telling me life is good
And you'll make it better
Just one day at a time..

Genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood.
T S Eliot

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

1 posted 2001-03-17 12:37 PM

A very heartfelt poem Kate, and I am sure if "he" is there, "he" will be all that and more for your kind, loving heart. Pssst....when you find him, ask if he has a brother!

A lovely poem.

~*~A poet is someone who reads more than they write ~*~

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2001-03-17 02:14 AM

Oh,Kate~
This is just so lovely.

'Will you hold my hand
Telling me life is good
And you'll make it better
Just one day at a time..'

So very, very lovely.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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KokoStewartKoomoa
Senior Member

since 2000-12-04

Posts 580
Waikiki, Hawaii

3 posted 2001-03-17 03:47 AM

This is very touching..I relate. i pray he comes into your view and soon.
love you! Koko

Passion,imagination
and intellect
running together...
Poetry in motion~~~

Aloha with
warmest regards, Koko

Katherine Chandler
Member

since 2001-03-07

Posts 280
Florida, USA

4 posted 2001-03-17 04:05 AM

Marge..thank you so much, that was one of my favorite parts of the poem too.

Koko.. I love you, thank you for being there for me. And thank you for reading and enjoying my poetry. You know what it means to me.

Genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood.
T S Eliot

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

5 posted 2001-03-17 04:55 AM

This is so tender and openly searching.....marvelous writing!.....I'm looking for someone that will .......

"Will you accept my imperfect body
Knowing it is not the whole of me.
Will you tell me it's inner beauty
You seek and nothing more.."

I'd have it made then! I wouldn't have to lose 25 lbs. I'm just acting silly here ...I really enjoyed the poem so very much!

The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges.

Katherine Chandler
Member

since 2001-03-07

Posts 280
Florida, USA

6 posted 2001-03-17 05:32 AM

Thank you, Sharon. These are questions I think we all ask at one time or other.

Ethome..thank you for you kind compliments, I would like to think there is someone who still is able to accept us as we are.

Genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood.
T S Eliot

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

7 posted 2001-03-17 07:36 PM

"yes. . . "

and when you hear that answer. . . you'll know. . .

wonderful Kate. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Mabel A. Dilley
Senior Member

since 2001-03-17

Posts 859
Seattle, WA, USA

8 posted 2001-03-17 07:50 PM

Katie, some of these questions I can fulfill, and others I cannot, but enjoy your friendship none the less.

Julian Lester

Katherine Chandler
Member

since 2001-03-07

Posts 280
Florida, USA

9 posted 2001-03-17 08:03 PM

Sven, thank you so much for understanding this poem. I look forward to the day when that special someone will say, "yes" and I'll know he's talking to me.

Kate

Genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood.
T S Eliot

Katherine Chandler
Member

since 2001-03-07

Posts 280
Florida, USA

10 posted 2001-03-17 08:17 PM

My sweet friend, thank you for making me smile today. You do accept me as is, how many friends can say that in all honesty? I know two who can. You and I.

Katie

Genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood.
T S Eliot

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