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Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

0 posted 2001-03-16 10:30 PM

In
mind dreams I

sketched the memory of you,

dancing me on waters edge,

sitting on rocks watching ebb tides

flow in sunsets...
Days&nightsruntogether as

sanity unfolds to long hours of

weary business & sleep, sleep so infrequent,

when my eyes close, I only see you
It is then, in my

serenity of darkness,

in my peaceful dreams,

when my mind can rest
I feel you

echo through

every chamber
of my Soul

***

"Within you I lose myself
Without you I find myself
Wanting to be lost again."
-Unknown

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

1 posted 2001-03-16 10:34 PM

this is excellent. . . and again, has that dream-like quality that shows in all your work. . . and I LOVE the font that this is in. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2001-03-16 10:42 PM

GreenEyes~
Captivating !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

3 posted 2001-03-16 11:42 PM

Captivating indeed

I liked.

Maree

I may know the word but not say it
I may know the truth but not face it
I may hear a sound a whisper sacred and profound
but turn my head indifferent.

Natalie Merchant

[This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 03-16-2001).]

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

4 posted 2001-03-16 11:46 PM

when my eyes close, I only see you
It is then, in my

serenity of darkness,

in my peaceful dreams,

when my mind can rest
I feel you

echo through

every chamber
of my Soul

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enchanting and entrancing...
and you already know I felt every line...
beautiful poetic reflections GE.
written with your signature soft spoken grace

We wish ourselves beautiful,
we cry in the night.
Its not the love you fear ...
its the fall from the height.
~Edwin McCain~

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

5 posted 2001-03-18 02:44 PM

okay. . . this goes back. . .and I have to add it to my library as well. . . it's excellent. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

6 posted 2001-03-18 02:49 PM

Stunning work, Greeneyes. Lovely thoughts for a lovely day.

Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

7 posted 2001-03-18 02:52 PM

I can only echo the sentiments from above....well done, little one...

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