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Paradigm Mirrored
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Paradigm Mirrored |
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Sunshine
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Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Paradigm Mirrored reflections cast come back at one a silver spoon inverts a face a calm still lake casts one in grace a clear glass shall cast reflection but silvered glass causes introspection to look beyond glassed-in mystery to look behind the back of thee to see within where true beauty lies a clear glass still casts inspection but silvered glass causes reflection the most excellent mirror, if truth be told are when my love's eyes are in my behold 01.15.01 |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Seeing one in another's eyes is always the greatest mirror....nicely done, ms. Sun  |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'to see within where true beauty lies a clear glass still casts inspection but silvered glass causes reflection' Wow. This is excellent, Sunshine! Absolutely beautiful! sp  I won't go; I won't sleep; I can't breathe until you're resting here with me... |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
i want to smash the mirror sometimes and just let the shards of glass reflect all the broken parts of me..... thank you for the read |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
Yes, the eyes are the portal to the soul, they say. |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
This is a very beautiful and introspective piece, you've written here, Sunshine! Nathan |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
'Deer, why thankee Sir.... Snow! Thanks for dropping in for a read!... Doreen, no, you don't...'cause you'd just have to go to WalMart for another one and then you'd find yourself over in the CD section picking out another PS disk...right? Right!...now write.... MirrorMan...yes, they do...thank you for reading.... Nate, so glad to see you...thank you! |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
"the most excellent mirror, if truth be told are when my love's eyes are in my behold" Mirror mirror on the wall who writes most cogent words of all whose eyes hold mine in their enthrall who wrotes great poems in verses small? Sunshine writes these words so bright they captivate me through the night |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Why Mr. Yeats....thank you for this....it truly pleases me.... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
indeed my friend. . . we are never more beautiful than when are seen in the eyes of one that loves us. . . excellent poem. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sven, a little late, but nevertheless, a heartfelt thanks.... |
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