Open Poetry #12 |
Unspoken Sorrow |
Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
I carefully adjust my mask before I face the day; the one that I've been wearing ever since you went away. Your coming brought a happiness like none I'd ever known. Your going left an emtiness that chills me to the bone. Your sisters and the others try so hard to take your place. For their sake I must smile and show of sorrow not a trace. My firstborn and my only son, of whom I was so proud, I mourn the boy and the man, but nevermore aloud. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I see what this says...I send my prayers... |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Humbly...I know nothing else to say but Amen. Heal. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Such sadness and sorrow to be kept within. Powerful piece. Deepest sympathy to you and your family. God bless. Lone Wolf Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Thanks to all of you good people. Its been two years and everyone is moving on, but it just is taking his mother a lot longer. Love, Joyce |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
My heart goes out to you... You have my sympathy in your loss and my admiration for being able to channel your tears into the powerful avenue of poetry... this is painfully beautiful. *S* |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Joyce: I'm sorry for what you are going through. The poem is so true! You have to wear a facade for the sake of others, but the pain never goes away. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Martha Cowan Member
since 2001-03-08
Posts 240Groves, Texas |
Joyce ~ this touched my heart deeply. I lost my dad in a tragic car accident eight years ago, and this reminds me so much of the thoughts that my grandmother and I both had following his depature. Wiping a tear, I thank you for sharing this very beautiful voice from your heart with us. Happy weekend, and many smiles and blessings sent your way, Martha Cowan |
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