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| Open Poetry #12 |
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If I Were a Poet |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania 
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If I Were a Poet Would you think me romantic, if I were to write Sonnets that whisper to you through the night Words of enchantment, music of love That float on the soft pillow wings of a dove Would you find me endearing if I could impart The pleasures of you with a verse from the heart If I could write lyrics so pleasant to hear And make God’s sweet sounds come alive in your ear Would you find me enchanting if I were to sketch Colorful visions that memories will etch Songs you’ll remember of soft rhythmic rhyme Never forgotten through ages of time If I were a poet, would you love me more Would the poetry capture your heart evermore Would my garden of words bring delight to your eyes Would my sonnet of love glow from bright starry skies Elizabeth Santos |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Liz---YOU ARE A POET! and a very good one. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
My Lady Santos....I adore you...regardless of your words....but as a poet....I love you even more... |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Lovely poem as always. No doubt of it, you are a poet. Joyce |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Would I think you a poet if you could do these thing? You just did!  You are a poet, and a good one at that.  <*\\\>< I know not what the future holds, but I know Who holds the future. I don't question YOUR existance - GOD |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
You ARE a poet and this was fabulous verse!! LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Well I DO think you're a romantic, endearing, enchanting poet who captures our hearts with soft rhythmic rhyme and brings delight to our eyes with your garden of words... and you ARE greatly loved. *S* Anymore questions? LOL. Great poem, Elizabeth! |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Without question, you are an amazing poet, as was this poem!~ Take care, Melissa~ |
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Red-uni Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 192Georgia, USA |
Enjoyed your poem very much, for you are a very good poet. Red |
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DreamLess Member
since 2001-02-28
Posts 92 |
no one can write some great word like that exept some wonderful great heartful poet , and guess who would that be?! WRITTEN BY ME..(17 YRS HIGHSCHOOL GIRL) EASY ON ME.. I'M JUST AN AMATEUR |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Whaddya mean if Don't ever give in, if you do you've lost everything you've ever had and everything you hope to gain, but if you carry on your already winning. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
You're already a fabulous poet...because of the heart and soul that you portray through your wondrous words of love.....Your poetry is an extension of you and that's what endears me to your work because the person that is really you shows through your poetry but it also tells me that I would think the same of you even if you were'nt a poet....just because you're you! thanks again for sharing this Elizabeth.....take care ethome The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges. |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
If you're not a poet, there are none. I could read your posts from sun to sun. They flow like a pleasant rippling stream Taking me places I'd never dreamed. Rae |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
your work is always outstanding! It's a treat to read what you write! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Katherine Chandler Member
since 2001-03-07
Posts 280Florida, USA |
Reading your poetry is like reading your heart, I'm sure. Pure beauty.. KateGenuine poetry can communicate before it is understood. T S Eliot |
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