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Open Poetry #12

In you

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

0 posted 2001-03-14 02:57 PM

The quiet morning,
brought me your smell.
Your sweet essence,
reminds me of your passion.
You sweat,
sweet taste to my own passion.
The touch,
that leads me to heaven.
The sound of your voice,
is melody to my love.
When you call me,
my heart melts.
Your picture,
a constant reminder of who I love.
Your face,
just prefect in my eyes.
In you,
I find all the love I want.

A quarter of a century must pass, for the writer to understand what and why he writes.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2001-03-14 03:06 PM

"Your face just perfect in my eyes.
In you I find all the love I want."
I know these feelings well...James

Just A Woman
Senior Member

since 2001-03-10

Posts 507

2 posted 2001-03-14 03:19 PM

That's beautiful, Walker!

After years of searching, I have found I am nothing more, nothing less...I am in truth Just A Woman after all.

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

3 posted 2001-03-14 11:13 PM

Oh to be in love!! Great writing, I love the graphic too.

Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

4 posted 2001-03-15 09:19 AM

Love the way this makes me smile.........so sweet!

SEA

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