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Romeo First Attempt at DA
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Angel Senior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 551Pennsylvania 
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Don't be too rough, first attempt at double acrostic. Romeo, Romeo, where is my Romeo Ender of happiness, bringer of pain Just when I found love, there was truth Empty heart, empty soul owned by you Cringing, I've always been full of fear Tearing out my already too weak heart In vein, in order to find more believers PS. Not a true story< !signature--> "Do you love me because I am beautiful, or am I beautiful because you love me?" ~Cinderella [This message has been edited by Angel (edited 01-15-2001).] |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Definitly does...and I applaud you on a very well done acrostic--enjoyed the read. Poeminister [This message has been edited by Poeminister (edited 01-15-2001).] |
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Angel Senior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 551Pennsylvania |
Poeminister, Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it. I think I'll give this acrostic thing another shot. ~Susie "Do you love me because I am beautiful, or am I beautiful because you love me?" ~Cinderella |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Nice accoustic...lovely read! Nathan |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
i didn't know what an acrostic was...(more of a street poet than a scholarly one i guess...) but i do now. and i must compliment you, very hip and clever. very well done. it does hurt, too. You don't hear much about guys who take their shot and miss... |
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Angel Senior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 551Pennsylvania |
Nate Dogg, Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. Ethan_Halo, I only know thanks to Nan and all the other wonderfully potectic people around here  . Thanks, definitely not the best thing I've written, but at least I can say I did it.~Susie "Do you love me because I am beautiful, or am I beautiful because you love me?" ~Cinderella |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Wonderful double acrostic and I can't wait for your next one. Be warned though, they can be as addicting as Haiku's and Senyru's. You will find yourself writing them left and right real soon but that isn't a bad thing anyway. I enjoyed it very much. |
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Angel Senior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 551Pennsylvania |
Mark, Glad you liked it but don't count on me getting addicted to them anytime soon . They are just about impossible for me. I'm not too sure where this one even came from. Thanks for Reading, ~Susie "Many people hear voices when no one is there. Some of them are called mad and are shut up in rooms where they stare at walls all day. Others are call |
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