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vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2001-03-14 11:31 AM

There were times
When you wrote this song
and I did not realise
how much It meant to be a song
that came to my mind,
All the words you wrote ,
you just sang the words,
The words you wanted It to say,
Long ago,
There was a love,
A love that
would bring us happiness,
a song that would bring us together,
And I didn't realise that the
song you wrote it
was for me,
When I listened to the song,
over and over again,
I realise those word you wrote
and those words
you were trying to tell about,
how much you love me so,
Now this song meant
something to me,
I won't forget this song
Because you wrote It
just for me
And I love you from
the bottom of my heart

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-03-14 11:34 AM

Vandana~

this is wonderful!!

SEA

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

2 posted 2001-03-14 11:47 AM

Sweet lines here and loads of love....a searching poem right up until the end....good work!!

The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges.

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

3 posted 2001-03-14 07:42 PM

it is my hope that you will never stop singing my friend. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2001-03-14 11:03 PM

Sing it, Vandana. Beautiful song, my friend.

Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

[This message has been edited by Lone Wolf (edited 03-14-2001).]

Mike
Member Elite

since 1999-06-19

Posts 2462

5 posted 2001-03-14 11:22 PM

Very nice Vandana... liked your poem a lot.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2001-03-15 05:21 AM

Enjoyed reading your poem vandana...James

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