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helen smith Member
since 2001-03-12
Posts 240 |
He leads her to the naked beach. Moonlit thoughts disrobe her. Darkened waves are the only witnesses to Searching hands beneath the frothy lace of the sea. And they wont tell. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Welcome! and ..........WOW.............so sensual......beautifully done!  SEA |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Oh boy! (welcome) more!! more~!!!!!!!! Kathleen Blake "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey." Laurie Lee |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Welcome The beach, the moonlit thoughts, and the waves. Really does paint a picture. bernie Bernie Slicker |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Welcome to passions enjoy the read |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
WELCOME! this is a very sensual piece and good writing! The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges. |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Truly excellent! This poem holds a lot of power. Welcome to Passions! ~Allan If I had your eyes, I'd be blind. For I can only see out of my own. ~~Carly Van Dort |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
no kidding, sensual...erotic...and to the point...nice stuff lady welcom |
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helen smith Member
since 2001-03-12
Posts 240 |
really? tehheeeeee and I felt so rude showing it to you ...... |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
as a poet, I never say anything in reply I don't mean. This is fabulous, Rude? NO! More.....more Kathleen Blake "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey." Laurie Lee |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Welcome!!! Truly superb...there's just enough mystery that the adventure beneath the waves could be fantastically sensual, as the poem is, or dastardly awful...keeping with just the tiniest element of suspense brought on by the words 'disrobe' and frothy foam. Didn't I meet you on another board sometime in the past, Helen? You name's familiar. Virginia Salter |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Welcome to Passions...and? don't know about elsewhere? but here? there is a "shot" drink known as "sex on the beach" which by tradition, must be followed by a second shot, called "sand up yer..." well, you get the picture! (that stuff gets everywhere!) Welcome! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A grand Welcome to Passions! Short, sweet and to the point! Made me smile! Check your e-mail for a special message! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Simply sensual Helen...James |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
Greetings A Beautiful way to start out! ~*Peachy Be*~ |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Helen, I loved this little perfect gem, look forward to more please!! and welcome to Passions hope you enjoy your stay, Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Waseem Cheema Member
since 2001-03-16
Posts 369Pakistan |
It took me to the dreams. It is I who took u there. ......Smiles |
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