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Open Poetry #12

Within Your Eyes

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

0 posted 2001-03-13 03:03 PM

My sojourn here is at an end.
It's time to say good-bye, my friend.
I've done the things I had to do
And said farewell to all, but you.
Between us there has been a tie.
You've let the summer pass on by
Without a word to show that you
Feel more than friendship. I have too.
I see you standing by the door.
We hold hands, as we have before,
But when I start to turn away,
You utter just that one word, "stay!"
And stay I will, for I can see
Within your eyes, my destiny!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2001-03-14 05:27 AM

How nice to find your destiny...James

Allan Riverwood

Member Elite

since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

2 posted 2001-03-14 10:31 AM

A simple rhyme. I enjoyed it a great deal.
~Allan

If I had your eyes, I'd be blind. For I can only see out of my own. ~~Carly Van Dort

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

3 posted 2001-03-14 10:39 AM

beautiful..I often feel that way
and wish for him to stay...

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

4 posted 2001-03-14 10:49 AM

nice poem

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

5 posted 2001-03-14 05:53 PM

James, Allen, nakdthoughts and Vandana:

Thank you all for commenting on this poem. I appreciate your remarks.

Betty Lou Hebert

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2001-03-15 08:07 AM

Trillium~
Oh... nice, very nice.
You captured a moment that lasts ...

And I, in soft turning ... stay.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

7 posted 2001-03-15 09:01 AM

Betty....wow!

Nate Dogg
Senior Member

since 1999-11-15

Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

8 posted 2001-03-15 11:33 AM

A well-written piece.....wonderful poem....thanks for sharing!

Nathan

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