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Temptress
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since 1999-06-15
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Mobile, AL

0 posted 2001-03-12 11:04 PM


In the storm this morning,
There was a calm anger breathing and feasting,
On vulnerabilities and sedated will.
While the rain came in torrents of tormenting drops,
The wind finally spooked what once was a truly lit central organ,
With a tireless passion for hope and life.
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This next one is not as it appears to be, so for all the ones close to my heart...don't read it with reality in mind.

Won't you please forgive my mood,
And if you won't then leave me here,
Because I really don't care about you,
Or your smiling laughing eyes,
Filled with long ago trappings of old friendship,
And missed chances.
I love you in friendship,
But don't want to deal with your feelings right now.
is that so selfish of me?
To protect myself from something I don't need protection from?
I love you in friendship,
But sometimes I'd like to think that you didn't want me,
So I wouldn't have to feel guilty about being your friend.

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Freedom breath,
Longed for then left.
Story told,
Attack unfold.
Nameless names,
Careless blames.
Writhe within dreaming,
You faulted
I'm screaming.
Want left alone,
But that voice,
Wanted to hear.


© Copyright 2001 Jennifer - All Rights Reserved
Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
1 posted 2001-03-13 05:59 AM


Temptress,
nice shards here, pots of poetry.
write on
Kethry


Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.



Sven
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since 1999-11-23
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East Lansing, MI USA
2 posted 2001-03-13 01:06 PM


ok, now it's time to pick these pieces up. . .



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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Irish Rose
Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

3 posted 2001-03-13 04:34 PM


Ok, Elmer's Glue for poetry think of the beautiful work of art you'll have here

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee



[This message has been edited by Kathleen (edited 03-13-2001).]

Red-uni
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since 2000-07-30
Posts 192
Georgia, USA
4 posted 2001-03-15 12:02 PM


Great images. As, always, I enjoy your writing. _ Red
My mouse has been out of order, lol, had to wait til Gateway sent me one so I am behind on the reading and commenting on poerty...but I'm back.

Temptress
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since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136
Mobile, AL
5 posted 2001-03-15 12:10 PM


RED! Welcome back, and thank you!

Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637
Escondido-California
6 posted 2001-03-15 02:11 PM


Hi Temptress,

I loved all of them so full of powerful imagery and passion, I would not say these beautys are clutter at all,

Love, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)



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