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A Moment
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A Moment |
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The Aquarian New Member
since 2001-03-12
Posts 1 |
Hey all, I'll be honest, I'm not much of a poet but here is something a wrote down a couple days ago. Blue sky's cover my eyes, As soft winds move by. A cold rush dances through me, My body turns to stone. I'm forgotten... In the same moment I'm Embraced, I'm left alone. In the same moment I'm Attentive, I turn away. In the same moment The wind comes near, The wind turns And runs away. There is no hello, There is no goodbye, There is only the moment. |
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Just A Woman Senior Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 507 |
Well, you may not think you're much of a poet but I really liked this. Very profound. You have me some things to reflect upon. I thank you and welcome you! After years of searching, I have found I am nothing more, nothing less...I am in truth Just A Woman after all. |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Welcome to the family. There is no goodbye, There is only the moment. A moment is all it takes to feel the wind. |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
First time? This is very good. You said a lot in a few words. Welcome. I am new too but this seems to be a friendly place. Joyce |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I enjoyed this moment...James |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions! You may think you've not a lot to say, but your words belie that... and check your e-mail for a special message! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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