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Just A Woman Senior Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 507 |
I watch the rain splashing against the patio pooling up upon the concrete and myself sitting upon the step How it runs down my legs in droplets as if in search before finally reaching the soil where it soaks in to nourish And how it seems to recognize that neither I or the concrete are open to it's gift Only the soil, the ground, that soaks it up in thanks and produces life in return |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh yes...I like this very much... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
And how it seems to recognize that neither I or the concrete are open to it's gift Only the soil, the ground, that soaks it up in thanks and produces life in return ============= very cool and unique perspective in which to write from ... me thinks that you are more open to its gift than you know after reading this gem of wisdom Welcome to Passions ... so nice to have you here with us. take care jm We're living in a world full of illusion Everything is so unreal My mind is in a state of confusion But I can't deny the way I feel ~Depeche Mode~ |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
This reminds me of a rain poem I did awhile back . . . must go see if I can find it . . . Thanks for the remind. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Just wonderful. . . rain will always be. . . welcome. . .  ----------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Just A Woman Senior Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 507 |
Thank you for the welcome! I will look forward, Krawdad, to reading your poem should you find it. After years of searching, I have found I am nothing more, nothing less...I am in truth Just A Woman after all. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Nice to read you! This is very specific imagery here, I liked that very much! Kathleen Blake "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey." Laurie Lee |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~VERY cool thoughts portrayed in poetry. Enjoyed this. *Peace. |
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