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Oceans of Desire |
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windwarrior_RJ Junior Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 28California |
Dancing in the wind of silence, a breeze in the face of desire. Hard I am to follow, free in the flight of birds, wings spread aloft to carry. An updraft on the whims of life. All these thing do not compare, to what you do to my heart. A sea of change the tide of life,in and out, Love drifts slowly in the waves, created by memories of your smile Oceans of desire,form the swell that washes over my soul I long to drown myself in your passions. A lifeline you are to me, the very breath of life I breathe My friend,my love In love with you, I will always be. With all before, the very past, I know this love will forever last, Only you, Believe me, only you. I lay thee down in a bed of desire, Of you, my love I never tire, Naked truth you are with me, your fragrant love has set me free. I know this doesn't compare to what you write, but it is from heart. RJ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very, very nice..James |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
This is beautiful, RJ. Welcome to Passions  Maree I may know the word but not say it I may know the truth but not face it I may hear a sound a whisper sacred and profound but turn my head indifferent. Natalie Merchant [This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 03-11-2001).] |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
R.J.= this is quite beautiful...poetry from the heart..hmm i'd say that's the best kind of poetry there is and you'll fit in with us just fine welcome to passions. i look forward to reading more of your work take care. amy "A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart & can sing it back to you when you have forgotten the words." |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Dancing in the wind of silence, a breeze in the face of desire. Hard I am to follow, free in the flight of birds, wings spread aloft to carry. An updraft on the whims of life. All these thing do not compare, to what you do to my heart. =================== wonderful imagery and express of emotion this is a lovely poem of inspire. Welcome to Passions ... its very nice to meet you... I look forward to reading more of your work take care jm We're living in a world full of illusion Everything is so unreal My mind is in a state of confusion But I can't deny the way I feel ~Depeche Mode~ |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Romantic and tender!!! Nicely woven. |
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Just A Woman Senior Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 507 |
There is a beauty to love, something so entirely giving and sweet, and you've captured it here. Really nice. After years of searching, I have found I am nothing more, nothing less...I am in truth Just A Woman after all. |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
Ohhhh RJ!!!! Oh you took me by surpise!!! I am soooooooooo delighted to see you post here. What a joy to see this poem posted. I miss you! I really hope to see you post some more here. I am so happy to know you are writing again. I know how hard that was to get the muse to cooperate again. Me too sweetie, I am posting, but it is a hard time and the writing is not as easy for me either. They are fewer , but I am still working at it. aloha nui loa, Koko Passion,imagination and intellect running together... Poetry in motion~~~ Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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