Open Poetry #12 |
Just A Quiet Night |
Just A Woman Senior Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 507 |
My heart is so quiet tonight Tired, perhaps As if the emotions flooding through it have been too much in too short a time Weakened it somehow As if to say "Tomorrow is another day, but tonight I'm done" and I can't help but understand and be thankful for just a quiet night |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Just A Woman, welcome to Passions!! How wonderful when our body tells us it is time to take a break and rest. Like your words. Hugs, ME |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Dear Just A Woman. Your name says it all. We all need that rest at the end of the day. Good work. |
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windwarrior_RJ Junior Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 28California |
Nice thoughts. Thanks for your welcome to me here and may I extend the same warm welcome to you as well. RJ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed reading your poem..James |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions! Somehow, I think you will go far beyond "just" being a woman, or a poet....somehow I think you might fall into a "wow" category.... and please, check your e-mail for a special greeting! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Just A Woman Senior Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 507 |
Thank you so much, everyone, for the warm welcome. |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
yep had many a night like this, welcome Don't ever give in, if you do you've lost everything you've ever had and everything you hope to gain, but if you carry on your already winning. |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
*sigh Yes, sometimes a quiet night is worth more than a diamond ring or a new car...... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JustAWoman~ Welcome to this circle of Passionate friends and poets. You will find a warm hearth among friends here. Come and rest your quiet upon our pages. Enjoyed your render. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
WElcome!!! Thoroughly enjoyed the serenity of this. The emotion of tiredness and the acquisition of peacefulness exudes from it. It makes me recall the small amount of a program I saw last night about stress, a wake-up call for women. This poem would be a lovely potion for the weary in acquiring sleep. Well done! |
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thecraig Member
since 2001-03-11
Posts 223 |
Maybe an inspiration to future inward restoration |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
. . . and "just a quiet night" is so much more. Welcome to Passions! Hope you enjoy your stay. We'll look forward to more from you. |
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Katherine Chandler Member
since 2001-03-07
Posts 280Florida, USA |
Welcome to Passions and in reading your work you are so much more than 'just a woman' and it shows a lot in your writing. I look forward to more. And I love your quote! Kate Genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood. T S Eliot |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Welcome and I really enjoyed your poem. I had a quiet afternoon today and was so very grateful, too! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Just, Welcome and I enjoyed the read. |
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Just A Woman Senior Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 507 |
Thank you so much everyone for such a kind and wonderful welcome. I've truly enjoyed reading everyone's work and look forward to so much more. After years of searching, I have found I am nothing more, nothing less...I am in truth Just A Woman after all. |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
Hey... Welcome! Great poem to start with i liked it ~*Peachy Be*~ |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Welcome to Passions. There is always a tommorrow, so quiet tonight is alway a peaceful. Bernie Bernie Slicker |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Just A Woman, I love the thoughts you captured in this very well done and welcome to Passions hope you enjoy your stay, Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS NICE POEM LOOKING MORE FROM YOU |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Sorry it took me a while to get in here... WELCOME!! This is wonderful! SEA |
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