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Afternoon Respite
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Afternoon Respite |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Afternoon Respite Virginia Salter haze clings to high rises filled to the brim busyness, mercantilism straight, bony fingers erect towering over Lake Union sunlight bounces from mobile bubbles going to, fro, fore and aft as white triangles gee and haw across the pond and I mesmerized in my peace solitude © July 10, 2000 Written from Gas Works Park in Seattle, looking across Lake Union at the city, the Needle and motions of a living city. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Nice descriptive phrasing here, Virginia. Kathleen Blake "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey." Laurie Lee |
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Embers_Before_God Member
since 2001-03-06
Posts 101USA |
I liked the imagery of this piece...thanks for sharing your talent...Embers Dance with me under the moon. Touch my pale skin. Devour me. Love me. |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
It's nice to sit back and watch sometimes ... a tranquil open mind ... chewing on a blade of grass ... waiting ... for anything  nice writing |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
VAS I like the descriptions in this. Nicely penned. Poeminister |
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