angel, unaware (for Stan, with gratitude)

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angel, unaware (for Stan, with gratitude)

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

0 posted 2001-01-15 01:20 AM

after the storm
there you are
the prism shining
in my sky...
the covenant
of promised bless
to wipe the teardrop
from my eye...
and there are times
in life we seek
a stranger's eyes in lingered stare...
and so sublime
is love's release
to greet the angel, unaware.

*be well, lovely one...prayers in my heart for you*

Poeminister
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since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

1 posted 2001-01-15 01:26 AM

Serenity--Beautiful write and dedication...
wonderfully penned.

Poeminister

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Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2001-01-15 01:50 AM

Serenity~
You're a little sweetie, ya' know ?
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Stan
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since 2001-01-01

Posts 120
Inland Empire Southern California

3 posted 2001-01-15 02:07 AM

Serenity,

You have a wonderful touch for expressing your heart.
A rare talent and genius. I admire you so!

Thanks so much, Stan

catalinamoon

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since 2000-06-03

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The Shores of Alone

4 posted 2001-01-15 06:30 PM

Sweet and perfect.
Sandra

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

5 posted 2001-01-16 07:22 AM

serenity, I too recently wrote a poem called angels unaware (it must be the magnetic flux) but I like yours so much more!
Write on
Kethry

Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

6 posted 2001-01-16 10:30 AM

This is a sweet poem for a very sweet man. If I may...I'll agree with every word, and add extra Thanks to him for his friendship so far.

Can I be your willful breeze,
Come to touch,
Your heart to ease?

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