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Katherine Chandler
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0 posted 2001-03-08 04:30 PM


I looked in the mirror,
Not recognizing her face.
Who was this woman
Who had stolen my place?

The sad looking eyes
Were starring my way.
This isn't the woman
Who was with me today.

No smile on her face,
Only tears that stained.
She wasn't here earlier,
This woman looks strained!

Her lips are quivering,
And she seems so uptight.
Where is the woman
Who was with me last night?

Her hands are trembling,
She seems so full of fear.
What will it take
To bring brighter days near?









Every saint has a past and every sinner has a future. ~Oscar Wilde~

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1 posted 2001-03-08 05:01 PM


Katherine, the face in the mirror is the angel in your heart! A wonderful first post at Passions! Welcome, and check your e-mail for a special greeting!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




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2 posted 2001-03-08 05:17 PM


Hi Kate! Welcome to my new home, and I love it! Hope you do too. That was too sad, and I want to see one of your wonderful shining bits of inspiration up here on demand please? So glad to see you posting, hugs.

~*~A poet is someone who reads more than they write ~*~

Packratmike
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3 posted 2001-03-09 01:52 AM


Well written (sad) poem.....

Packratmike

KokoStewartKoomoa
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4 posted 2001-03-09 04:03 AM


Hey Amazing Kate!!!!! YEEE HAAAAWWWW!
SO GLAD TO SEE YOU HERE TOO!
This is sad poem, but no where near truth..... sad feelings perhaps, but you are one lovely woman. thru and thru.
We just will have to keep each other smilin' and encouraged.
I guess you saw that Mysteria is here too.
I am tickeld pink ya know...(a funny sight to behold)
I will be watching for more poems. Drop me a line when you post so this fast moving board doesn't let me miss anything.
Much Love, Koko


Passion,imagination
and intellect
running together...
Poetry in motion~~~

Aloha with
warmest regards, Koko



FrankBH
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5 posted 2001-03-10 04:43 AM


Hi Katie. Beautiful poem as always from you. Hope a new day brings new reflections. Frank
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6 posted 2001-03-10 09:15 AM


sometimes I see this face in the mirror too. Good write

Don't ever give in, if you do you've lost everything you've ever had and everything you hope to gain, but if you carry on your already winning.


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7 posted 2001-03-10 10:47 AM


Heartwrenching for those who understand because they've been there! Well said. Welcome to Passions! I shall look forward, greatly, to more from you.
Katherine Chandler
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8 posted 2001-03-11 01:20 PM


Thank you so much for all of your comments, they mean a whole lot to me.

Blessings always

Kate

Genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood.
T S Eliot

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9 posted 2001-03-12 10:01 AM


Well written... I like this very much! *S* Welcome to Passions! *S*
Cerenity
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10 posted 2001-03-13 09:10 AM


Hi PrincessPout,

I love this wonderful, wonderful and welcome to Passions hope you enjoy your stay,

Love, Cerentiy


"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)



Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 2001-03-13 09:32 AM


Princess,
Good thoughts, good words, good write.

Katherine Chandler
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12 posted 2001-03-13 08:03 PM


Thank you so much for the nice words, this is one of my favorites and I appreciate your reading my work and also your compliments. I really like it here! Kate

Genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood.
T S Eliot

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