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Open Poetry #12

Two Hearts Become One

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2001-03-08 04:20 PM

TWO HEARTS MEET
CARES DRIFT AWAY
TWO ARMS EMBRACE
HEARTS NOW LOST TO DREAMS
SUCH TENDERNESS
AT SUCH WARM CARESS
AS EYES MEET
AND SOULS ARE UNVEILED
TWO HEARTS - ONE VOICE
WE LOSE OURSELVES IN EACH OTHER
SOFT LIPS ARE JOINED
TWO HEARTS BECOME ONE

Katherine Chandler
Member

since 2001-03-07

Posts 280
Florida, USA

1 posted 2001-03-08 04:47 PM

Dear Sue,

Great to see you here and be able to enjoy your poetry. Welcome to Passions! I really liked this poem today.

PrincessPout

Cerenity
Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 2637
Escondido-California

2 posted 2001-03-09 09:53 AM

Hi Suetang,

This is beautiful, one is blessed when they find them selves in such a union, welcome to Passions and I hope you enjoy your stay here look forward to more of your work.

Love, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

3 posted 2001-03-09 10:37 AM

A poetess who entwines real with dream...

lovely...

POETIC THUG
Junior Member

since 2001-03-08

Posts 42
HOUSTON TEXAS BABY

4 posted 2001-03-09 10:41 AM

I love it it gets to the piont and easily read.

POETIC THUG
Junior Member

since 2001-03-08

Posts 42
HOUSTON TEXAS BABY

5 posted 2001-03-09 10:41 AM

I love it it gets to the piont and easily read.

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

6 posted 2001-03-09 11:30 PM

Dear Sue: This makes me want to experience falling in love all over again! Very nice!

Betty Lou Hebert

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