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An Angel Without Wings
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An Angel Without Wings |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia 
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An angel came but he wasn't to stay How broken were our hearts that day So deeply loved But needed in heaven above Our souls were crushed He was gone all too soon So perfect in every way All too soon was he taken away Too good for this world, he was needed elsewhere The sorrow and grief was just too much to bear Why him? we would ask And receive no reply As a tear trickled down from the corner of my eye A life cut so short We could not understand We wouldn't see him grow into a handsome young man Life can be so unfair Too easily we forget Just one precious chance Is all that we get An angel without wings Not a day this life brings When we don't feel that you're near And we wish you were here It just wasn't to be Although we just couldn't see Why such a tragedy came to be Sleep peacefully beautiful angel......... |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Losing a child is an horrendous thing. May the Lord continue to give you peace in his memory. |
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A Mused Cupid Junior Member
since 2001-03-07
Posts 19A comfortable place |
This is a truely sad poem, yet I see it written in a way that will help those left behind to recover from such a loss in their lives. |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
Perhaps that's exactly why he has passed on...The Lord wanted your angel close to him.. knowing you would meet him again. (one day) Love is God. Love is war. Love is what your life is for. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SueTang~ Welcome to the poet's friendship circle. A poignant piece from your heart that tugs the heartstrings of mine. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes sleep peacefully beautiful angel...soft and sweet words...James |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Welcome and this is sad but beautiful! Kathleen Blake "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey." Laurie Lee |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Sad but beautifully expressed... welcome ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A very special Welcome to Passions! Your own poetry is a fine example of sharing what you, too will find as you read others... Please check your e-mail for a special message! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
WELCOME! This is beautiful! A reminder of how short our time really is here. I really believe they're too good for the world, and needed more somewhere else. Very touching, specially in light of all these school shootings. It's so sad. <*\\\>< I know not what the future holds, but I know Who holds the future. I don't question YOUR existance - GOD |
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JCGF Member
since 2001-01-19
Posts 72MA |
I literally got the chills from head to toe. What a great peace you have penned! Welcome and please share more. Thanks again. Hugs Tammy |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
I havent replied to any poetry in a while and rarely even then in Open, but this piece was so beautiful and sad. Everyone is an angel from God waiting for our wings to fly, be it here on earth or in heaven. Your child must indeed have been special to God for he needed him early. You will see him again some day. Dawn |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Lovely and sad. I've heard that babies are bits of stardust blown from the hand of God...sometimes He needs those bits back sooner than other. Take care. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
You've picked a beautiful piece of sadness for your first contribution... Excellent work... I look forward to reading more. Welcome! |
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Katherine Chandler Member
since 2001-03-07
Posts 280Florida, USA |
Such a poignant poem, sad but beautifully written, Sue. Blessings, PrincessPout (Kate) Every saint has a past and every sinner has a future. ~Oscar Wilde~ |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Suetang, God only loans us His children. I know I forget this each time one is born into our family. All I can think is you must be very special for Him to take this angel back so soon. How wonderful of you to share this with us and as you first poem here. Thank you and hugs, ME |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I know this feeling, my friend...it is hard to find a reason why a child leaves this earth...you have expressed your feelings beautifully. |
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