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walker
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since 2001-02-11
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Florida

0 posted 2001-03-07 06:37 PM



One kiss from you,
and my soul looses
itself to you.
Suspended on air,
I lie in your arms.
I love you.
You touch me,
molding me to you.
Caressing me,
again and again.
Capturing me,
leading me there,
strong and sensual,
to where only you can take me.
I love you,
my words slip out,
tenderly.
Your ears,
embrace them.
You swallow my passion,
while our eyes contemplate each other.
There can be no other.
For I,
belong to you.


A quarter of a century must pass, for the writer to understand what and why he writes.

[This message has been edited by walker (edited 03-08-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 walker - All Rights Reserved
Lone Wolf
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1 posted 2001-03-07 06:40 PM


This is totally beautiful. Wonderful writing, walker.

LW


Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

sans38
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since 2001-03-03
Posts 117
Westland, Michigan
2 posted 2001-03-08 11:23 AM


Oh My! This made my heart go pitty pat : ) What a wonderful tribute to the one you love!
Poeminister
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since 2000-02-26
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Regina SK; Canada
3 posted 2001-03-08 12:16 PM


Walker--Lovely write...beautifully expressed.

PM

JLR
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4 posted 2001-03-08 02:24 PM


I've read this over and over...contemplating what to say. I think I will write myself, in response. Inspiration, as love...comes when I am not looking.
inot2B
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since 2000-09-18
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Arkansas
5 posted 2001-03-08 02:41 PM


There can't be no other.
For I,
belong to you.

This is beautiful!!
What more can one say!!

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2001-03-08 03:26 PM


The beauty of two with the same desires....James
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7 posted 2001-03-08 04:05 PM


I want to find that kind of belonging! *S* This is great... I enjoyed very much.
vandana
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8 posted 2001-03-08 05:17 PM


enjoy your read
JLR
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9 posted 2001-03-08 05:34 PM


Thanks for the line, hope you didn't mind.
Sunshine
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10 posted 2001-03-08 05:43 PM


Walker...a wonderful read....thank you for this....
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