Open Poetry #12 |
I belong to you |
walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
One kiss from you, and my soul looses itself to you. Suspended on air, I lie in your arms. I love you. You touch me, molding me to you. Caressing me, again and again. Capturing me, leading me there, strong and sensual, to where only you can take me. I love you, my words slip out, tenderly. Your ears, embrace them. You swallow my passion, while our eyes contemplate each other. There can be no other. For I, belong to you. A quarter of a century must pass, for the writer to understand what and why he writes. [This message has been edited by walker (edited 03-08-2001).] |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
This is totally beautiful. Wonderful writing, walker. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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sans38 Member
since 2001-03-03
Posts 117Westland, Michigan |
Oh My! This made my heart go pitty pat : ) What a wonderful tribute to the one you love! |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Walker--Lovely write...beautifully expressed. PM |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
I've read this over and over...contemplating what to say. I think I will write myself, in response. Inspiration, as love...comes when I am not looking. |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
For I, belong to you. This is beautiful!! What more can one say!! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
The beauty of two with the same desires....James |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I want to find that kind of belonging! *S* This is great... I enjoyed very much. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy your read |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Thanks for the line, hope you didn't mind. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Walker...a wonderful read....thank you for this.... |
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